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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

I left him my suitcase full I ran fast but he followed and found me- I had to HIDE trembling with closed eyes, "I prayed" __________________ September 5, 2017 Whitney Verse/HELP Copyright Protected, ID 937527 Written for the contest, Whitney 2 sponsor, Nette Onclaud Fourth Place

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 9:16:00 AM

An intense scene you've created in your poem BW. A scene that is played out too often in our world. Well written.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2017 1:45:00 AM

Congratulations, BW on your placement.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:24:00 PM

Congrats!!! Constance... on a beautiful win my friend...god bless and stay well...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:41:00 PM

Wow, I REALLY like how you did yours, Constance. THAT is a scenario I see played out on my crime drama channel ID all the time. One of my favorites here. Congrats on the win.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations Broken Wings :)

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations! Such an important story to tell.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 11:53:00 AM

constance, delicately scribed with a sense of helplessness...i congratulate you for a splendid win!...thanks lots for joining this challenge.. huggs

John Lawless

Date: 9/6/2017 9:43:00 AM

BW, you have touched the core of terror with this brief yet powerful encounter.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 5:11:00 AM

Wow, this is fantastic Constance! What an entry into Nette's contest! You have tugged on my heartstrings and made me feel for this woman in your poem, quite magnificently! That is the whole point of writing, to bring feelings of whatever you are trying to portray, and you have done an excellent job at this! What a tremendous piece, Great Work my friend!!