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Whitey-2--Going Home

going home where I was born I will see the empty house near the field of weeds and trees It's where I was abandoned contest Whitey-2 9/4/17

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Date: 9/16/2017 9:40:00 AM

Sad and emotional.

Date: 9/15/2017 1:08:00 PM

Congrats Frederick on this touching write, a worthy winner!

Date: 9/11/2017 10:35:00 PM

Nicely done, Frederic, congratulations on your new! hugs Eve

Date: 9/11/2017 6:03:00 PM

Congrats, Frederick!

Date: 9/11/2017 5:49:00 PM

Congrats!!! Frederic on your 1'st place WIN!!!...^WW^

Date: 9/11/2017 5:30:00 PM

A very well deserved win. Congratulations

Date: 9/11/2017 12:11:00 PM

Fantastic emotional twist at the end. very powerful. congratulations!

Date: 9/11/2017 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations Frederic! :)

Date: 9/11/2017 10:13:00 AM

mellow tone that ends with a touching feel, frederick...big congrats on your high award and thanks for joining... huggs

Date: 9/6/2017 6:05:00 PM

This has got to be one of my very favorites of the ones I am seeing today. Wow.

Date: 9/6/2017 9:38:00 AM

nice job Frederic, leaves the door open for many interpretations of the "abandonment".

Date: 9/5/2017 2:00:00 PM

So sad! Great interpretation. :)

Date: 9/4/2017 6:27:00 PM

What a good way to interpret that picture. Oh boy, I need my thinking cap right now!!! Good luck, but you shouldn't need it.

Date: 9/4/2017 4:27:00 PM

The way you interpreted the concept is astonishing, especially the end line! I want to try this if I can. Thank you.