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Whitewashing the Fence

I've constructed a picket fence around me to keep jackanapes out
Through pickets they can see me, but I never allow them to touch
private parts of me I keep concealed, and don't talk about so much
I keep whitewashing my fence, cleansing it from things left in doubt 

When my boards become exposed to prying eyes that shouldn't see
I open another bucket of watered-down paint and reach for a brush
to cover the flaws, my faults within, and I am always in such a rush
to whiten and brighten the facade out front. The veneer veiling me.

There is a gate with well-worn hinges, but usually it's kept locked
to prevent invaders who would dare trespass on my every thought
Those who'd despoil my fence with graffiti and rip my boards apart
Hence, one reason why I keep a supply of whitewash well-stocked

I am the prismed reflection of my surroundings, including my fence
where no webs shall arachnids weave within my weathered boards.
I will apply a coat of whitewash to my palisade as the need affords
It is a beachhead between me and crawlers; my penury of defense

Twining around my picketed railings, grows a vine of climbing roses
The virtuous blooms are never cut to prolong each inculpable stem
They shroud malevolent fingers pointed at me that would condemn
I shrive every foible and failing that my whitewashed fence encloses


May 28, 2023
W T F Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 10:21 PM
Amazing, Lin. I bet you won big. Congrats
Watt Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Lin, you chose such an apt metaphor for the self-protection that builds over time, and did an amazing work to sustain that image throughout, examining its many ramifications. I thought your line "reach for a brush to cover the flaws, my faults within" was especially salient, as I have done so many times. Also loved "I am the prismed reflection of my surroundings" and "The veneer veiling me"; two phrases (among many) of sheer poetry. Belated congrats for your POTD acknowledgement - much deserved. Blessings to you, my talented friend ~ John
Watt Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 12:09 PM
The feeling is absolutely mutual, my friend :)
Lane Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 6:28 AM
John, quite often I read an encouraging comment like yours and wonder, "What did this poet see in my lines to find it so worthy of commendation?" You always spell it out and then I have to read my poem again. You always comprehend my intent, John and sometimes make me smile in so doing. For those moments, I wholeheartedly thank you.
Lawless Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 1:37 PM
WTF, this is the second entry into this contest that was a POTD...amazing as was this write. "my penury of defense"...a line that will stay with me and torment the muse. Thanks for entering the contest Lin
Lane Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Your contests always make us reach for the chance to fulfill a good challenge. Good themes produce great writes, John. Thank you for pointing out the line you liked. Use the phrase. I borrowed the words from Mr. Webster. ;-) Just beginning to feel normal after a bout with the flu... it won.
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:09 AM
dropping back with many congrats Lin think we need concrete blocks around us some days! hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:16 AM
What we need is people who can figure out how to let go of a bone when all the meat has been chewed off. Especially if it wasn't their bone in the first place. Thanks ever so much, Jan.
Kauffman Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Back with congratulations for your win in John's contest! Two honors for this wonderful poem! This poem is "bustin'" out of its fence!! Blessings!
Lane Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:15 AM
lol Sam, That's quite a grand way of supporting this poem. I am very honored that you've returned with more congratulations. thank you!
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Back with congrats on your contest win, Lin. No doubt your poem was delightful and deserving of the honor.
Lane Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thanks very much for your second round of congrats, Lasaad.
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Ah it took a master poet to compose this one! A true jewel and a fine fav my friend. I love reading poetry like this. God bless..
Lane Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words of encouragement, Robert. I'm so glad you're back.
Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Wonderful metaphoric write, Lin with very profound images! Very original in thought and execution. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings.
Lane Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Hiya Sam and my sincere ‘thank you’ for the great comments and congratulations.
Y. Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 9:32 AM
WoW! Lin, This is such a well-written clever and profound write. I echo what Valsa said. Congrats on getting the poem of the day and best wishes in the contest. Have great a day;-) Alexis
Lane Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 10:32 AM
You are such a sweet friend, Alexis. Thanks so very much.
George Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:10 AM
This is indeed a remarkable entry for the contest ! Very profound. We all like to whitewash our exteriors, hiding the defiled innards from public view. Lin, this is first rate poetry. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
Lane Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Thank you for such gracious remarks, Valsa. Your great review is a joy to read.
Kaufman Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:46 AM
This is such a rich write so full of metaphors. I have to share it with friends and mark as a fav. Absolutely loved it.
Lane Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Thanks so much for liking it enough to share. I appreciate you, Nancy.
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Awesome work, Lin, honest and brilliant:) a sure winner:)
Lane Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Good morning, Jo and thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:46 PM
This is really good work. Wow. I predict a win!!
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:19 PM
Thank you very much.
Oldham Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Facinating write here, Lin! And an interesting metaphor for the walls we carefully construct to preserve ourselves. Congrats on potd! Best, John
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your comments and congratulations.
Tor Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 3:44 PM
Wonderfully written and a theme we can all appreciate. Congratulations Lin on your POTD Honors...
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Thanks very much, Michael. It’s been a while since seeing you.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Thanks a bunch, Kim!
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Such a pity, the guarded world we must inhabit now... btw, Lin: If you're looking to paint your fence, I know a friend of mind offers a great deal for first-time customers. His name is Tom Sawyer. lol. Congrats on POTD!!
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thanks, GW but Aunt Polly keeps him close to home. ;-) and thanks for the congrats!
Bell Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Congrats on POTD. There's not enough whitewashing going on if you ask me. Mind you, I'd need a fence.
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Let’s spread the word and get one built for you, Paul. Thank you for your thoughts.
Baker Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Thank you for giving us a look through the fence, Lin. I enjoyed getting to know you a little bit better, my friend. Good luck in the contest! We all try to look white-washed on the outside most of the time. Congratulations on your POTD! Bill
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:11 AM
You're very welcome to peek inside my fence, Bill. You'd be welcome inside. Thanks for the congratulations and your sweet remarks.
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Lin, wow, what an incredible poem, I was riveted to every word till the end and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor !
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so very much for letting me know this one held your interest. That's a great compliment!
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Lin. You have earned the spotlight. Enjoy your special day.
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Welcome back with your congratulations, Vijay. Thanks. It's a fine day.
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:29 AM
I'm delighted to see you honoured dropping back with many congrats on POTD Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Thanks for coming back, Jan, and for your congratulations. Hugs for you, too.
May Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Congrats on POTD Lin, Very nicely penned
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Thank you ever so much for your thoughts, Joseph.
Kitchin Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Lin, a superb poem, love the fence metaphors and the imagery throughout your poem, congratulations on POTD!
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 5:14 AM
G'morning, Tania and thanks a lot for appreciating the metaphors and imagery. You have access through the gate anytime you wish.
Turner Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Hey hey hey:) Congratulations Lin on POTD. I like your fence with roses.
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 5:13 AM
Hiya, Danny. Thank you for liking my fence and roses. I have a brush that you can use if ever you would like to do a little whitewashing. ;-)
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