Whitewash

Great alliteration...

I have to time and time again. Life changes, and so does the actions. I try to not repeat the same sins like King David. Strong and crafty peace!!

Deep, Pace, very deep - But damn good also! Lots of things going on here in my head, all differing ones every time I read it - Love it! My very best regards, Pace. :) john P.s An obvious seven!

Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7

INK, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Wishes for the wisdom work.Regards. -Safa

This is deep, but good. Great work and thanks for the visit to my page.... Lucilla

wow! "whitewash" hi pace! "welcomes whistling wings." i love that,well done. with whisting words were wide windows.. .thanks,.shabnamshirvani

Who mentioned alliteration?:))) Great man! you did a great job here; a cleansing write! // paul

sounds like a cleanse to me. nice one!

My tongue was my enemy when reading this! It took me a few times but I read it, understood it, and love it. Really enjoy the feeling I get once read

My tongue was my enemy when reading this! It took me a few times but I read it, understood it, and love it. Really enjoy the feeling I get once read

Nice grace Pace! love it! wide windows....

Lots of wow W words in this tanka to make it ring out with alliteration and the message too is amazing.

Grace is a wonderful element of a loving God..Sara

Just A Note: I Failed To Mention That, As Millions Of Priceless Lives Are Starving To Death About This Globe; Others Somehow Feel Justified In Allowing While Defending Such ? Man, But That's Just One Grain Of Sand Amid, Babylon's Woes....Thanks For Stopping By My Poetic Friend...Love, Jeremy

Beautiful!! The cleansing of the soul. Love your use of alliteration -- "W" seems the perfect choice for this theme. Xx~Xx

Awesome work here and thanks for your uplifting visit. Really well crafted I must say! This poem gave me hope this morning. All wrong is forgiven I think, when one repents. Always, Laura

Well done and a very interesting write here nicely worded. cheri also thank you for your comment i'm glad you enjoyed my fathers son

VERY well penned Pace! Faving this!

Yes, Worshipping Her Store Front Window On Rodeo Drive Or Perhaps Another Of Bugle Boys High Rises ? Washed Clean With Slime Green Sheens Sparkling Revenues And Oh The Wondours, Within It All....In Mexico Their Killing Children And Freezing Their Organs ? In Africa As Her middle East, Their Just Killing Children ? In America, Their Much More Covert As Subtle In How They Proceed, To Strip Their Seeds....Love, Jeremy

oh my, a double form packed with superb imagery--- awesome alliteration and tanka, pace... you wow!.. huggs

This is an amazing feat you present. I have never seen a tanka with all the words beginning with the same letter. How you made the whole write make sense is incredible.

A very good write as I see it Pace, hope it does well for you, I think the W's angle is quite cool, thank you for the visit to my page..'