White Terns

Come fly with me
said she
One good tern
deserves
another
And did I so yearn
with her to share 
the air

Up we soared
and down we roared
between the sea's deep blue
and sky's paler hue
Between the waves’ white spray
and clouds high away

As speeding arrows, we traced
two trails across foam crests
calling as we raced
pure, sweet nothings
And sharp as scimitars
our slim, white wings
spray and air did slice

Enough said she, no more
And down and down she dove
and through the great pine’s boughs
a twisting path she wove
wings fluttering fast
until at last
by her side she bid me settle
So I passed the test
that measured well my mettle
that meant with her I’d nest

Like some other species White Terns engage in courtship flights.  The male flies after the female matching her aerobatics as best he can.  Apparently his genes are being tested
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August 2, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Very nice poem that rolls along and creates some wonderful images. I am now following you. I look forward to your next poems. Cheers
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April 25, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Robin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 1, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Hi Skat Thanks very much for the welcome and all the encouraging comments. I am only an occasional poet. I've only averaged a couple per year, but have produced a few more in the last couple of years. I find inspiration doesn't come very often. You might have picked up that I am from down under. Best regards Robin
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April 24, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Excellent poem Robin. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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April 24, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Hi Robin, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs.
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April 24, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Hi, Robin,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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April 24, 2016 at 6:08 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Robin. :)
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