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White Picket Fence

I don’t want the white picket fence I’ll take the one that’s weathered by time Bent in a way that gives it character Bordered by tall grass and wild thistle You might rest your elbows on it after a long day And smile at the sunflowers I planted Because you know that when their yellow heads grow too heavy They’ll have something to lean on

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Date: 1/20/2022 3:34:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 1/20/2022 1:36:00 AM
Yes, weathering can definitely give character. Nice piece, Phoebe!
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Date: 1/19/2022 6:59:00 AM
"Because you know that when their yellow heads grow too heavy They’ll have something to lean on" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/19/2022 6:58:00 AM
Oh Phoebe, the warmth of love over the years is so evident in this masterful piece. Beautiful metaphors make this entry so special. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:59:00 AM
Wonderful write. I love it. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/6/2022 1:26:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the beauty that lies in fences...."And smile at the sunflowers I planted"...great line. Cheers,Paulette
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Date: 1/6/2022 8:23:00 AM
Phoebe, Robrer Frost said 'Good fences make good neighbors'. Your nostalgic Picket Fence poem reverberates in fine message and poetry. -Richard
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