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White Peacock - Visual 2

He stands his feathered wings proclaiming his manhood he dances, mesmerising the pea hen.

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Date: 2/1/2015 2:22:00 PM

SEREN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Date: 1/28/2015 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Seren! I think you chose the most difficult picture to work with and you did it beautifully...hugs, Rhonda

Date: 1/25/2015 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations, Seren. those male peacocks truly mesmerize their mates!!

Date: 1/25/2015 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations Seren, I really like this one!

Date: 1/25/2015 2:56:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2015 3:30:00 PM

thanks Jan, nice to have a placing with it ....Seren

Date: 1/16/2015 6:37:00 PM

Wow you have been busy writting. Another contest entry, hope you rank well again.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2015 10:49:00 AM

lol Maurice when the mood takes me I write.....Seren

Date: 1/11/2015 11:21:00 PM

Was this a White Canada Peacock? :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2015 11:22:00 AM

Smack. Not everything is Canadian. Lol....Seren

Date: 1/11/2015 5:00:00 PM

Very colourful Seren...C--->A

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2015 7:36:00 PM

Thank you ......Seren

Date: 1/11/2015 3:30:00 PM

Oh how he struts his stuff Seren - great write - good luck:-) hugs jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2015 4:21:00 PM

Typical male, showing off, lol....Seren

Date: 1/11/2015 2:51:00 PM

Outstanding -- I think the pea hen is impressed, I am by your wonderful poem, love and light. 7

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thanks David nice to see you and receive your comment.....Seren