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White lines not right lines

You stole her from me and I hate you for it, You're more fun than I am and I hate you for it, You give her more confidence than I can and I hate you for it, She'd rather spend time with you and I hate you for it, I'll be here when you're not and she'll love me for that, I'm more patient than you and she'll love me for that.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/24/2025 7:25:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.