White Light

White light through the night Piercing, dividing, soul, spirit Intents of heart

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/20/2009 4:14:00 PM

nicely penned

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2009 3:43:00 PM

Your Haiku is beautiful and spiritual as His White Light... enjoyed... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/20/2009 1:15:00 PM

Very nice Haiku, Sara. Keep your spirit and pen flowing. I'll be offline for a certain time - could be for some weeks - as I am moving to the most southeastern part of Germany, only footsteps away from Poland and the Czech Republic. But I#ll be back. Thank you for commenting my Senryu Faces...Gert

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 1:01:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku, Sara. I hope you have entered it in Raul's contest. Love,Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2009 11:16:00 AM

Heavenly Haiku Sara >> James

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/20/2009 10:14:00 AM

Dear Sara: Great poem. Small on words, big in message. Yours respectfully: Sheol