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White Horse

The White Mare the incoming tide made an island out of the sand bank where I sat, king for a day, made a crown of coarse grass but since I only ruled over a few crabs, who bit my finger when I shook their claws, I renounced my crown and swam ashore. Sanitation workers, in blue overalls and logo, heckled me since I was not like them and they made fun of my crown. On an incoming wave a white mare came, bareback I mounted and gently the horse trotted amongst the awestruck workers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/3/2012 5:28:00 AM
Jan - Oh to be different. You never fail to amaze me with you analogies. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/3/2012 9:09:00 AM
thank you Kathy
Date: 5/2/2012 4:05:00 PM
this is so vivid and wonderfully written. i love the image of you in your crown "trotting amongst the awestruck workers." that'll show 'em!
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/3/2012 3:23:00 AM
thank you Ilene
Date: 5/2/2012 10:12:00 AM
jan this is great, I love the imagery here..David
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/2/2012 11:00:00 AM
thank you David

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