White Cross

wooden cross along a country road planted deep in the ground where Spring has brought her lilies

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/5/2024 9:32:00 PM

These wooden crosses along the highway, I've seen them myself. This is a very descriptive poem. It was enjoyable to read.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 4/3/2021 12:28:00 PM

Beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2021 4:38:00 PM

wow, that's really nice.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/14/2021 1:54:00 PM

Lovely and poignant cinquain, filled with sadness and grace. Take Care, Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2021 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful! You leave the reader with this imagery of a church cross, or one that has been placed where a loves one died. “Planted deep in the ground,” also draws us to a possible burial. I love this little thought provoking poem. Fave