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White Chalk In the Rain

White chalk in the rain I can’t stand the thought of sitting on a street corner, writing on the curb with white chalk in the rain Outlining puddles in runoff contaminants, bleeding into the asphalt, following the cracks and crevices of the last poem I wrote in permanent ink, when the sun danced across her smile and my words brought blue skies to the pages of my heart’s desire I hate chalk…..

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Date: 10/12/2017 9:05:00 PM
I also do not like chalk. I never wrote well with it. i like this poem you wrote. This poem is different, you wrote this poem very well. Peace and love to you my friend.
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:22:00 AM
Man, this is so unique and so insanely good! Love it! It's a very vivid image. In a very strange way that I don't understand myself, it reminds me of a small Dutch poem, where the poet ponders about lettuce..... yes really!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:31:00 AM
Hmmm, lettuce, I like that. Maybe I will get ahead some day. :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 7/6/2017 9:02:00 PM
Very expressive Chris and yes, chalk is so messy! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:31:00 AM
It is and all of that dust makes me sneeze. :) Thank you so very much Sara.
Date: 7/6/2017 7:26:00 PM
I hate chalk too, Chris. A little glimpse into the real Chris Green? Deep write!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Dan, sometimes writing feels just like that...chalk in the rain. Washing away before anyone gets to see it. Thanks again my friend.
Date: 7/6/2017 6:32:00 PM
So reflective of you, Chris! Don't worry, it will eventually be gone. Meantime, sweet dreams.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend, yep, at least chalk isn't permanent. :)
Date: 7/6/2017 4:59:00 PM
Hi Chris. Well expressed! Ok - No chalk. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 5:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi. Just posting a few stinkers. :)

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