White Before My Eye

Within a gentle breeze I move
carrying white before my eye
gliding forth a Canterbury sky

Lions roar and tees get crossed
puffs signal a strength inside
anxious slays abstention lost

Shifts in fragrant fumes ferry
crimson tales filter through light
as pure visions come to sight

Rest weary pilgrim rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Good Morning Tim. May the white (light) always be there for you and for one and all. This is beautiful expression. It is calming with such grace surrounding thoughts. Wonderful entirely. Enjoy the morning and day.
Vaso Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Came to read this again!
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 3:42 AM
- Tim, this is so beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 9:18 PM
I agree with Darren, this little poem is buried inside of a deep history!
Lane Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Crimson tales filter through light is very poetic, Tim.
White Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 3:14 PM
This is so beautiful. looks so simple, but it is far from...
Coreggia Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 2:52 PM
This beautiful poem reminded me of a pilgrim on his way to Canterbury who seems to be guided by a vision of pure love "White Before My Eye":) Amitiés
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