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White Invisible Trains Part1

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Vichy
 

Ice stiffened limbs Reaching out No saviors about Snow flakes in the wind I reached and reached and reached Towards deaths cold hands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/22/2018 8:27:00 PM
hmmm what I wonder will follow....Seren
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:36:00 AM
Leaves an eerie feeling, can't wait for part deux
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Date: 1/21/2018 8:36:00 AM
The imagery in your poem evokes an atmosphere of desolation. I like it.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:55:00 AM
The imagery is clear...I could feel the inner coldness right here...All the best Arthur
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