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White-Winged Wonder

A white-winged visitor stops by ~ Multichromatic flowers' delight amid rainbow hues flies a lone white butterfly ~ colourless wonder Flitting by, dazzling bright, There she comes, cabbage white, Blooms laugh at her tickle, God's undyed miracle. 29th May 2023 {Monoku: 17 syllables Haiku: 5.7.5 syllables Rhyme: aabb scheme, 6 syllables per line} Contest: A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - same theme Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/14/2023 7:35:00 AM

I love your "...undyed miracle." Jo. Quite lovely and serene scene you've painted. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 2:22:00 AM

- Congratulations Jo... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2023 3:40:00 PM

Joanna, a beautiful set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/31/2023 11:30:00 AM

Oooh yeahh wow God's undyed and dyed are all miracles and beauties, us we love white creatures. Kudos for this beautiful angelic poem! >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2023 12:13:00 PM

Love to see them in summertime Joanna, won't be long before they're fluttering around my garden performing aerial ballet. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2023 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful images in every form. Well done, Jo.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/30/2023 10:18:00 AM

You dazzled me with your poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/30/2023 7:44:00 AM

WoW! Jo, You did a great job with the contest theme. Nice rhythm and flow. It has good content and imagery as well. Butterflies are beautiful creatures. Best wishes in the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis