Whitby By Night

The moon reflected on the sea,
A night more beautiful than day.
I wheezed and struggled up the steps
And looked out over Whitby Bay.

I saw the harbour far below,
And heard the splashing of the waves,
I turned around to see the church,
The ruined abbey and the graves.

I thought of Dracula, the Count,
Imagined him and Lucy there,
And then I saw a hulking shape -
But, oh, the menace in that glare.

He showed his fangs and hissed at me;
My feet were rooted to the spot.
I cried for help and waved my arms
At people on a distant yacht.

He lunged and bit into my neck;
I tried to fight but felt so weak.
And that is how I came to die -
And you’re the prey I need to seek…

for Darren's Bram Stoker contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 16, 2014 at 6:12 PM
JACK, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 5:41 AM
excellent Jack, another one I thought fitted the brief and should have placed higher xx
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, jack
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Congrats on fine placing Jack. // enjoyed the transformation and the atmosphere. // paul
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Should do well in the contest good Luck Jack I really enjoyed the way you built up the tension in this poem. hugs Jan x
La France Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Jack, wow and wow, this is wonderful, your love of the dark shows bright and clear in this write, best of luck in the contest
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:41 PM
So evoking of the darker side of life jack. Awesome, Awesome write. Your frightening tale of Whitby by night. Peace. :) Someone's going to have to write one heck of a piece to beat this one.
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:25 AM
hey, this is GREAT. You are so good at doing these kinds of contests, Jack. You are being inspired by contests that I have not even considered trying . I like the quiet terror this one evokes. the way you built the poem up!
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest...Thanks for the visits..So you are now dead and still writing poetry?..Sara
Smith Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:18 PM
I love it Jack..Good luck in the contest....Tim
Johnson Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Good luck in the contest with this great poem. Thank you Jack for reading and commenting on mine. You are a great friend. Love, Joyce
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