Get Your Premium Membership

Whispers Unsayable

Escaping realities of dimensional virulent voids Thrown upon abstruse ambivalent planes of existence Where angels dare to dream; demons disseminate our thoughts Deception and illusion manifest as pandemonious processions preside Where gentle souls stroll like marionettes in theatres of tragedy And the clowns cannot remove their makeup: a permanent frown Echoes of whispers trapped within the infinite confiscated continuum. Nov.23.2017 UNSAYABLE Sponsored by: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/28/2017 11:53:00 AM
A spiraling of words combined into such a dramatic piece. When read I find myself careening into the end. A wonderful write! Loved this! XO
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2017 2:30:00 AM
Your imagery touched something inside me that recognized the feel you delivered. I cannot define it. A write to read and dwell on, great job. All the best ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2017 2:37:00 PM
A Mimes forbidden reality. Well done
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2017 12:10:00 PM
Ooo, mental candy! Thank you for the lovely treat. Awesome write.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2017 10:42:00 AM
Well written, WW--best for a win!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2017 8:49:00 AM
You did this very well, good luck in the contest..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2017 8:06:00 AM
A really deep poem, ^WW^, which, I must confess, I don't fully understand...
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things