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Whispers of the Wind

a bright moonlit night winds whisper songs of slumber ~ tranquil lullaby ( Theme:Whispers of the wind) 5/7/22 Contest: Haiku Nature Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet ( 5 7 5 syllable counts checked with howmanysyllables)

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/31/2022 7:40:00 PM

A grand Haiku indeed. The personification is engaging, + line 3 is an evocative end to your excellent write. Congratulations! Brian

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/1/2022 4:07:00 PM

Brian, thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2022 4:39:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. A nice breeze on a summer's night is delightful. Your visit to my blog was encouraging. Jr. is not doing well in his own words. They were to do another transesophageal echocardiogram sometimes today. Our daughter was to let us know when she knew how it turned out. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/29/2022 3:43:00 AM

Sara, thank you and I will continue to keep you and your family in my thoughts and hope your son has a full recovery soon.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/4/2022 1:11:00 AM

You had me at tranquil lullaby.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2022 3:38:00 AM

Thank you!

Fj Thomas

Date: 6/22/2022 8:33:00 PM

I could sure use that lullaby right now. So serene Tania :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thank you!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2022 11:54:00 AM

There's something so mesmerizing about the soft touch of the wind. I can stay in its soothing melody for hours. This is beautiful and tender. So elegant and graceful. :) Brandy

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thank you Brandy!

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/27/2022 1:26:00 PM

I had to come read this again!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/27/2022 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Mark!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2022 2:46:00 AM

Lovely and serene whispers, Tania. I love falling asleep to the sound of the wind! Congratulation son your win. Regards // paul

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Paul!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2022 3:36:00 PM

such a peaceful scene, many congrats on your win Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Jan!

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/14/2022 3:13:00 PM

How peaceful and serene, absolutely beautiful Tania!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/15/2022 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Mark!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/12/2022 11:18:00 AM

Tania, what a soft and serene feeling your lovely moonlit haiku evokes! I love moonlit nights when the soft breeze ruffles the curtains in a "tranquil lullaby." Congratulations on your win!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/12/2022 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Sam!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 5/11/2022 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement, nicely penned.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Joanna!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2022 7:25:00 PM

like a soothing lullaby. Wind was by far the popular choice of those on the winners' list. congrats

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/10/2022 2:44:00 PM

A haiku filled with soothing tranquility! How nice to sleep with that ambience. Congratulations and More power.^JCB

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM

Thank you JCB!

Ann Peck

Date: 5/10/2022 10:50:00 AM

Very lovely, Tania. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Ann!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/10/2022 6:58:00 AM

"tranquil lullaby" - Wow! Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2022 6:03:00 AM

Tania, Congratulations on your winning placement in the Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:18:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad for my placement and your comments, it was a fun contest!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/9/2022 6:55:00 AM

So peaceful! I love it :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/10/2022 3:40:00 AM

Thank you Heidi!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/7/2022 1:49:00 PM

There is a lot of serenity in your poem filled with imagery. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/8/2022 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Victor!