Whispers of the Wind

a bright moonlit night
winds whisper songs of slumber ~
tranquil lullaby

( Theme:Whispers of the wind)

5/7/22
Contest: Haiku Nature Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

( 5 7 5 syllable counts checked with howmanysyllables)

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Date: 8/31/2022 7:40:00 PM
A grand Haiku indeed. The personification is engaging, + line 3 is an evocative end to your excellent write. Congratulations! Brian
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/1/2022 4:07:00 PM
Brian, thank you!
Date: 8/28/2022 4:39:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. A nice breeze on a summer's night is delightful. Your visit to my blog was encouraging. Jr. is not doing well in his own words. They were to do another transesophageal echocardiogram sometimes today. Our daughter was to let us know when she knew how it turned out. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/29/2022 3:43:00 AM
Sara, thank you and I will continue to keep you and your family in my thoughts and hope your son has a full recovery soon.
Date: 8/4/2022 1:11:00 AM
You had me at tranquil lullaby.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2022 3:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/22/2022 8:33:00 PM
I could sure use that lullaby right now. So serene Tania :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/6/2022 11:54:00 AM
There's something so mesmerizing about the soft touch of the wind. I can stay in its soothing melody for hours. This is beautiful and tender. So elegant and graceful. :) Brandy
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Brandy!
Date: 5/27/2022 1:26:00 PM
I had to come read this again!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/27/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 5/21/2022 2:46:00 AM
Lovely and serene whispers, Tania. I love falling asleep to the sound of the wind! Congratulation son your win. Regards // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
Date: 5/17/2022 3:36:00 PM
such a peaceful scene, many congrats on your win Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 5/14/2022 3:13:00 PM
How peaceful and serene, absolutely beautiful Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/15/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 5/12/2022 11:18:00 AM
Tania, what a soft and serene feeling your lovely moonlit haiku evokes! I love moonlit nights when the soft breeze ruffles the curtains in a "tranquil lullaby." Congratulations on your win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/12/2022 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Sam!
Date: 5/11/2022 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, nicely penned.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Joanna!
Date: 5/10/2022 7:25:00 PM
like a soothing lullaby. Wind was by far the popular choice of those on the winners' list. congrats
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 5/10/2022 2:44:00 PM
A haiku filled with soothing tranquility! How nice to sleep with that ambience. Congratulations and More power.^JCB
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM
Thank you JCB!
Date: 5/10/2022 10:50:00 AM
Very lovely, Tania. Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Ann!
Date: 5/10/2022 6:58:00 AM
"tranquil lullaby" - Wow! Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj!
Date: 5/10/2022 6:03:00 AM
Tania, Congratulations on your winning placement in the Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2022 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad for my placement and your comments, it was a fun contest!
Date: 5/9/2022 6:55:00 AM
So peaceful! I love it :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/10/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 5/7/2022 1:49:00 PM
There is a lot of serenity in your poem filled with imagery. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/8/2022 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Victor!
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