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WHISPERS OF MYSTERY

Flutters… the butterflies, a parachute of rainbow light leaping from her pulse, her blond hair buoyant heavenly honeysuckle wafting, immersing him the daub of a fresh strawberry on her lips Whispers of mystery, in the dank closet, a couple strands. a lovely blossom under her précieux top perchance a predicament? Happenstance, he thought happily had bound two hearts, a pair of bodacious lips. sinks his knees into the mire, they shake no Virgin Mary in his mirror, mere...folly! 2/5/2019 Bardenesque Poetry Contest Sponsor - John Hamilton Words: Wafting, Daub, Whispers, Dank, Flutters, Perchance, Folly, Happenstance Précieux - from the French, meaning precious

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Date: 2/28/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. My favorite line: "a parachute of rainbow light leaping from her pulse..."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:57:00 PM
Well done Kim, such a scary little love, good use of language, enjoyed the read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Sheri!
Date: 2/21/2019 5:31:00 PM
Well done Kim, surprising how many top winners are women, writing Bardenesque style maybe easier for the ladies, who knew? Congrats on a fine win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 2/7/2019 2:18:00 PM
A lovely romantic interlude!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2019 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!