Whispers of Light

Hidden in the darkness of a forest’s thick brush
A white-tailed deer’s leg has been caught in a trap
Aside from her sad moans, she hears not a hush
No matter how she tries, her leg she can’t unwrap

And as she frets about the fate of her wee fawn
A light appears above and captures her gaze
As a bright image emerges, accompanying dawn
A choir of angels resounds with hymns of praise

She raises her eyes to see spirits afloat
Just in time to see one drifting down to her side
The doe utters a prayer, as the angel strokes her coat
And the power of this spirit cannot be denied

It takes but a whisper of hope to free nature’s soul
As suddenly the angel unharnesses her leg
The injured doe is carried beyond the dark hole
To a fawn that for its mother’s life does beg

These fantasies of the forest are quite common, you see
When a mother in peril needs the grace of God’s hand
To reunite her with a baby that cries out with glee
And two lives are saved by an angelic band



*Written by Carolyn Devonshire on February 16, 2014 for Gail’s contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 7:37 PM
This is very sweet..congratulations on your win...
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:15 PM
This is a sentimental song...str8 to the heart; expertly rhymed. // congrats on win. // paul
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 7:06 PM
This is so sweet Carolyn. I just found your comment on my Spaceship after I sent you an email that I am home again. Thanks for commenting. It is for a contest. Love, Joyce
Goff Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Carolyn...such sweet compassion envelopes this heartfelt poem, delightful! Jimbo
Makama Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Your words of new grain stock prepared and processed like well spiced pork with each line presenting a readily available fork to consume a wonderful meal is a simple description of your work full of creativity and intelligence.
Kapoor Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 9:06 PM
What a touching writes my friend. Your Poem leaves a silent message of Hope even amid the extreme dark's. Hope you are keeping fine Carolyn. Sorry that I am not regular on PS but I really miss a lot of my PS friends, whenever I think of any new Poem or Song. Best wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always.. Ravindra K Kapoor
Sivey Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Alas, this is a tremendously wonderful write my friend! You have done it again, gone and written a sentimental poem, a heavenly piece! What a harmonious poem , I enjoyed reading it tonight, Great Work!!
Ryerson Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Carolyn - This got me a little misty-eyed...Absolutely breathtaking and brilliant...Your style is unmistakable...I was SO thrilled and happy to see your comment! Please email me and tell me what is happening in your life these days - Tim
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February 16, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Also, VERY late congratulation to the Seminoles. Jimbo Fisher was Nick Saben's defensive coordinator at LSU so I was very happy for him and was glad to see Bobby Bowden at the coin toss. What a game it was!
Wilson Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Saving animals is one of God's methods of once more proving his love is real...beautiful poem Carolyn....luv,Deb
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Very happy to enjoy your muse, Carolyn
Thekidster Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 8:33 AM
As beautiful as Nature can be, not many are prone to see the true harshness it can provoke upon its wildlife. It doesn't help that man also contributes to this. Great write Carolyn.
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