Notes About The Poem

Anacreontic couplets are a form of poetry named after the ancient Greek poet Anacreon. These couplets typically focus on themes of love, beauty, and the joys of wine. They are characterized by their light and celebratory nature.

The Anacreontic Ode is proof that an ode need not be long and lofty. The Greek poet Anacreon often wrote odes in praise of pleasure and drink, a Dithyramb or Skolion. Often the odes were made up of 7 syllable, rhymed couplets known as Anacreontic couplets. 

The Anacreontic couplet is:
stanzaic, written in any number of couplets,
preferably short. The Anacreontic Ode is often made up of a series of Anacreontic couplets.
syllabic, 7 syllables for each line.
rhymed. aa bb etc.
composed to celebrate the joys of drinking and love making

Whispers of Heartbeats - Anacreontic Couplets


Velvet twilight softly spreads, in a sky weaving black threads. Moonlight beams as lovers play, passions dance as desires sway. Lost in whispers of heartbeats, savouring forbidden treats.
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Jones Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 3:19 PM
This is delightful. I love the word choice and the melody. Great job.
Proxenos Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 12:50 AM
How beautifully you write SO, so real ' 'Lost in whispers of heartbeats, savouring forbidden treats'. A very Happy Christmas to you my friend, may all your dreams come true. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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December 18, 2023 at 5:29 AM
Oh my, this is such a gorgeous Anacreontic couple poem that waltzes in such whimsical imageries and exquisite wordsmithery.. I love how you've created such a beautiful ambience, full of magic, splendor and romance. "Velvet twilight softly spreads", "sky weaving black threads" Ahh, the elegance of your words shimmers so bright here!! "Lost in whispers of heartbeats, savouring forbidden treats" Absolutely stunning and so graceful! An artistic piece this is... Just wow
Williams Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 2:05 AM
Softly romantic couplets S1. The song to go with it compliments beautifully.. Hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 9:09 PM
I note the restrictive limits as to its brevity as a whole to completion. I sense that 'tis the content's direct attribute to render such a result. I see the naturing indulgence via metaphorically intertwine sensibly, I rather enjoy that, Silent One. My friend, you have been quite busy sharpening our quills yon the humdrum of "None of that!" -- "Less within reason." OR "Out of the question!" -- "Lest you put it in another way." C'est la vie mon ami, Aloha, William
George Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 12:37 AM
Beautifully written . Softly flowing with romantic fervor. Enjoyed reading this small ditty of a poem. Silent one, you are equally proficient in writing long and short poems
Baker Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Poetically written love couplets, my friend. Very engaging. Bill
Delaney Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 6:26 PM
You make it look so easy, SO Flowing from your pen. Thanks for introducing another style for us to try taking us back to times gone by. SuZ
Hind Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Very beautiful... I loved the part about the twilight.
Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Eloquent and romantic with your usual delicate touch. Your poems keep me thrilled hugs Shadow
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Love that short form. You represented it very well
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Passions dance, lovers play, desires sway---words dwelling in realms of love. Fabulous poem, SO.
Empress Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Wow anacreontic couplets now thats new for me, I’ve never tried and maybe i will be too lazy to rhyme too. I absolutely love this. The shape is so cute. Ah you paint imagery in such a surreal manner that would take away the breath of any reader. I love the passionate and soulful ambience flowing throughout your lines dear silent one i especially love “ Moonlight beams as lovers play, passions dance as desires sway.“ wow’ how lyrical and moving is that! “ savouring forbidden treats.“ impeccable!
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