Whispers of Autumn

The clouds begin to grieve as the light veils
Leaves descend paths in a radiant  race 
Only the trees in the forest now  dwell 
Raindrops blast pain upon mugs without grace

Minds in a tragic war with expired life   
Dreaming of a rose-petal sweet sight
Storms blowing branches in their wretched strife 
There aren't rose rays to fly kids' merry kites  

The cordial wildlife no longer entices
Wee paws press panes desiring glimmer hype  
Nada rambling, eyes warped in devices     
Blood pressure rises and debris swims windpipe

Autumn,  the season when spirits are torn 
Lost in the grey union of dusk and dawn.
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Kauffman Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Stark images combined with vivid metaphors, Sabrina. Such a sense of turmoil and loss. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you.
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Such detailed and creative imagery well woven dear sabrina! I love the rhymes too in this poignant sonnet! I especially love “Minds in a tragic war with expired life Dreaming of a rose-petal sweet sight” touched my soul! The depth! Brilliant couplet to end it with, how you perceive autumn is well delivered! Pleasure reading this heartfelt poem..Best wishes! Sending you light!
Rose  Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Somber but very well written dear poet !!
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