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Whispers In the Wind

In the autumn of life, I hear whispers in the wind, faint voices blowing from the buried past Premature deaths of true enemies and fake friends In the spring of life, the die was then cast; I chose to walk down the righteous path, towards the Light They chose to have their dark flag flown at half-mast Desiring to become phantom creatures of the night, they loved sucking blood, and being covered in mud Breaking the laws of God with sheer demonic delight In the summer of life, the sweet fruit grew from the bud, and the right choices were there to pluck most liberally But their fireworks of hypocrisy fizzled with an unflared dud Empty vessels of vanity they foolishly chose to be, wayward ships foaming out their shame, dashed upon the rocks Evil cargo of ill-repute tossed and scattered to the sea In the winter of salvation, redemption got plowed under and blocked for those who died premature deaths of true enemies and fake friends And upon every barren, fallow field the ravens all came and flocked as I walked in the autumn of life, hearing faint whispers in the wind

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Date: 2/17/2017 12:06:00 PM
The wheat must be separated from the chaff. Nice write, Freddie:) I once wrote a poem entitled Echoes in the wind but it wasn't anything like yours:)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 2/17/2017 12:28:00 PM
Ty, Daniel. I hope your poem is posted on your page. Will go to see, if so, will read it. You are right about the wheat being separated from the chaff. That's how it is with the righteous and the wicked. Love your support, my friend. Love always.
Date: 2/17/2017 11:56:00 AM
You reap what you sew, well done Freddie...
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 2/17/2017 12:26:00 PM
Ty, Charlie. You most certainly do reap what you sow, my friend. No truer words indeed. Appreciate the kind comments. Love and peace to you always.

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