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Whispers Can Be Scary

Whispers can be scary if you're alone. Voices can sound sinister uttered low. Branches scrape windows; wind murmurs a moan. Whispers can be scary if you're alone. Imagine you go to answer the phone. "I see you," says a hushed voice you don't know. Whispers can be scary if you're alone. Voices can sound sinister uttered low. July 17, 2021 for the Whispers Poetry Contest of John Lawless (sorry I wrote wrong the last name of the sponsor the first time I entered this. I knew the right name, but my ditzy brain still wrote it wrong!)

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Date: 7/29/2021 12:42:00 AM
Poetry oft happens when you view something from a different perspective, and let me whisper: I see your point of view, Congrats for the win
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Date: 7/28/2021 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Yes, "Whispers can be scary if you're alone." A wonderful take on this contest. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
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Date: 7/27/2021 10:37:00 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/27/2021 3:50:00 PM
Congrats sweet friend. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:19:00 PM
I'm glad this was a short poem.....IT WAS STARTING TO SCARE ME!!! Great job and a nice take on the theme.
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:51:00 PM
That's quite a unique take on the contest, Andrea, great triolet as always:)
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:39:00 PM
Many can relate to this one. Creative take on contest.
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Date: 7/18/2021 1:26:00 PM
I like how you chose the same vowel sounds for endings; it sounds musical with the repeating phrases.
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Date: 7/18/2021 12:11:00 PM
I agree that would be scary. I can feel the emotion in this one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/18/2021 12:09:00 PM
Nicely penned, gl in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 7/18/2021 10:40:00 AM
Often wonder where the creaks and groans come from when I am alone. I like this poem, easy to read and very enjoyable...Delice
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:19:00 AM
Brilliantly written with your individual stamp of authority, Andrea! Good luck for the contest
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Date: 7/18/2021 4:49:00 AM
Ha ha ha... Indeed whispers can be scary... Beautifully narrated, Andrea... Great one for the contest...
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Date: 7/18/2021 1:30:00 AM
I like this simple and straight whisper poem! We all have experienced such fears! We lived in a haunted house and everything was scary!
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Date: 7/18/2021 1:27:00 AM
Funny how when you're alone your mind plays tricks on you. Tom
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Date: 7/17/2021 3:36:00 PM
This is wonderful. I hope it's a winner, Andrea. I love it. It's brilliant. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/17/2021 2:09:00 PM
I like your take on the theme! So true!
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:30:00 PM
When I was young I used to be afraid of whisperers. HUgs
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:53:00 AM
Chillingly effective write! A winner for me! Good luck in the contest, xomo
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:45:00 AM
- ... I see you ... and hear you ... the dark night whispers ... best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:15:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, Good take on the contest then.I find much truth in your well-written entry. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend. PS, I can't send soup mails; the sponsor to the “ Whisper” contest is John Lawless:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2021 5:09:00 PM
It's so weird, I was thinking his name and I still wrote it wrong. I don't know what goes on with me sometimes! thanks for the heads up.

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