Whispers Can Be Scary

Whispers can be scary if you're alone.

Voices can sound sinister uttered low.

Branches scrape windows; wind murmurs a moan.

Whispers can be scary if you're alone.

Imagine you go to answer the phone.

"I see you," says a hushed voice you don't know.

Whispers can be scary if you're alone.

Voices can sound sinister uttered low.


July 17, 2021
for the Whispers Poetry Contest of John Lawless
(sorry I wrote wrong the last name of the sponsor the first time I entered this. I knew the right name, but my ditzy brain still wrote it wrong!)
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Pathak Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 12:42 AM
Poetry oft happens when you view something from a different perspective, and let me whisper: I see your point of view, Congrats for the win
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Yes, "Whispers can be scary if you're alone." A wonderful take on this contest. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:37 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Congrats sweet friend. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Lawless Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 1:19 PM
I'm glad this was a short poem.....IT WAS STARTING TO SCARE ME!!! Great job and a nice take on the theme.
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:51 PM
That's quite a unique take on the contest, Andrea, great triolet as always:)
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 9:39 PM
Many can relate to this one. Creative take on contest.
Ligon Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:26 PM
I like how you chose the same vowel sounds for endings; it sounds musical with the repeating phrases.
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 12:11 PM
I agree that would be scary. I can feel the emotion in this one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
Rose  Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Nicely penned, gl in the contest Andrea.
Skelly Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Often wonder where the creaks and groans come from when I am alone. I like this poem, easy to read and very enjoyable...Delice
Seeker Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Brilliantly written with your individual stamp of authority, Andrea! Good luck for the contest
Kannan Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Ha ha ha... Indeed whispers can be scary... Beautifully narrated, Andrea... Great one for the contest...
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:30 AM
I like this simple and straight whisper poem! We all have experienced such fears! We lived in a haunted house and everything was scary!
Cunningham Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Funny how when you're alone your mind plays tricks on you. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:36 PM
This is wonderful. I hope it's a winner, Andrea. I love it. It's brilliant. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 2:09 PM
I like your take on the theme! So true!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 12:30 PM
When I was young I used to be afraid of whisperers. HUgs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Chillingly effective write! A winner for me! Good luck in the contest, xomo
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:45 AM
- ... I see you ... and hear you ... the dark night whispers ... best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:15 AM
WoW! Andrea, Good take on the contest then.I find much truth in your well-written entry. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend. PS, I can't send soup mails; the sponsor to the “ Whisper” contest is John Lawless:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 5:09 PM
It's so weird, I was thinking his name and I still wrote it wrong. I don't know what goes on with me sometimes! thanks for the heads up.
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