Whispers Beneath the Moon

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A golden moon rises above the fields of Portugal's Dark Sky Alqueva ...

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ whispers miles apart beneath the same golden moon— retorting echoes

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Tonye George

Date: 4/18/2024 9:30:00 AM

Our love is heard, whether it's sung or whispered. Cheers Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/18/2024 4:44:00 PM

so true, Tonye, so true. Thanks for sharing those words...have a great evening, Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/17/2024 1:43:00 PM

I like this Sara your whispers shout to be heard hugs Shadow

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:19:00 PM

thanks for your lovely comments, Paige. They mean a great deal to me. Hope you're improving...hugs Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 4/17/2024 12:23:00 PM

Your muse is on fire lately... a haunting image

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:18:00 PM

I agree, Paige, she is...spring rejuvenates her! :-) thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/17/2024 11:16:00 AM

Sara, I was captivated by the idea that you had when writing this Haiku about the moon. A glance at the enormous distances to the lunar surface is just stunning.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:18:00 PM

thank you, kind Sotto. Glad you found my idea and poem captivating as well as stunning. Appreciate your visit and encouragement. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/17/2024 5:31:00 AM

enjoyed your delicate haiku yann

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:15:00 AM

many thanks, Yann, for your visits and comments. Have a great day, Sara