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Whispers

Whispers How can I ever forget the evening we first met Under the twilight of placid sun about to set When your sweet whispers ably set me afire As I embraced in earnest your loving desire. You held me close intently as if for ever In language of sweet love eminently clever Inviting the peeking moon to join our affair As a distant star blushingly glared with flair. Lyrics of our romance resonated in my ear As rhythm of our hearts echoed with cheer Revealing tenderly a tale of heavenly bliss Singing sweet nothings with a passionate kiss. Your urges grew steadily more meaningful Each time your verses called me beautiful Intimating fondly that I occupied your mind Towering to heights only true love can find. We told each other wishes always come true For love we own is granted to a select few, As happiness willingly resides in our hearts Bonded with admiration that never departs. As your eager vibes pronounce our love anew Every word of passion draws me closer to you Conveying me to fervent places I never knew Craving for your touch as our feelings renew. Discourse of love resonates with adoring smile As we revel in romantic talk avidly fragile And echo of our minds reverberates with a sigh Enamored in angelic love that will never die. November 17, 2017 Whisper Sweet Nothings Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver First Place

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Date: 4/25/2022 7:22:00 PM
This an excellent poem charged with passion and emotion. I see here the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings of love as the lovers freely open their hearts and engage in the exchange of romantic gestures. These lovers, truly revel in romance.... ! Into my FAV.
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:27:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Vijay - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/23/2017 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Greg!
Date: 11/21/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congratulation on your win Vijay. That's a beautiful well constructed poem. I am happy you won.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/21/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 11/19/2017 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Line!
Date: 11/19/2017 4:18:00 PM
Hello Vijay, Thanks for your recent read of my new Rondeau poem!! And congratulations also on your First Place Contest Win. I can see why "Whispers" was picked for first-place. It's an extraordinary romantic write and is brilliantly written!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Gary!
Date: 11/19/2017 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Vijay. What a darling piece of poetry I especially love the last line. well done good poet well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Edward!
Date: 11/19/2017 1:39:00 PM
- Congratulations on this wonderful romantic poem, Vijay - Really enjoy reading - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/19/2017 11:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/19/2017 3:01:00 AM
How divinely romantic dearest, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:05:00 AM
Many thanks friend--see you soon in this space!
Date: 11/18/2017 9:20:00 AM
Fascinating love poem ... Great ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 11/17/2017 7:26:00 PM
radiant love poem, vijay...i like!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:40:00 AM
Thank you nette!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:48:00 PM
Very romantic and lovely Vijay and your rhymes are excellent as always. Wishing you the best for a contest win my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 11/17/2017 1:45:00 PM
Vijay, a beautiful love poem, best of luck in the contest !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you BW!
Date: 11/17/2017 12:55:00 PM
so romantic and lovely.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 11/17/2017 12:46:00 PM
Your lovely poem expresses the passion only romantic love can provide Vijay! Beautiful! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 11/17/2017 11:08:00 AM
Pure romanticism poetically personified, Vijay. You and my beloved friend, Chris Green are true Romance kings. Listening to "Peace of Mind" by Jerald Daemyon and reading this elegantly expressed poem is a transcendent experience. Beautiful quatrain. Love and joy always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:56:00 AM
A beautiful write Vijay! A true romantic! GL for a win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:33:00 AM
A very beautifully written romantic poem Vijay! Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:07:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous Vijay, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Maureen!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:04:00 AM
Ok Vijay...You're getting romantic...I call it a revival...Lovely poem...keep it coming
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 11/17/2017 8:28:00 AM
Lovely, dramatically romantic write, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 11/17/2017 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write Vijay...best wishes in the contest
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:03:00 AM
Very romantic my friend and once again great rhymes.. some lovely romantic lines... Good luck in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:03:00 AM
Oh, this is so beautiful Vijay! I felt the passion and sentimentality within this heartfelt poem! What an ingenious work of art my friend! You have encapsulated what love means within a romantic atmosphere...whispering sweet nothings is quite the pleasurable thing, with love all around you, what a delightful piece! This write made me want to hold onto my wife with all my heart and whisper tenderly into her ears....then bite them playfully (that could be another poem altogether)! Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 12:11:00 PM
Many thanks Russell--enjoyed reading your comment about holding on to your wife!

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