Whispers

Whispers How can I ever forget the evening we first met Under the twilight of placid sun about to set When your sweet whispers ably set me afire As I embraced in earnest your loving desire. You held me close intently as if for ever In language of sweet love eminently clever Inviting the peeking moon to join our affair As a distant star blushingly glared with flair. Lyrics of our romance resonated in my ear As rhythm of our hearts echoed with cheer Revealing tenderly a tale of heavenly bliss Singing sweet nothings with a passionate kiss. Your urges grew steadily more meaningful Each time your verses called me beautiful Intimating fondly that I occupied your mind Towering to heights only true love can find. We told each other wishes always come true For love we own is granted to a select few, As happiness willingly resides in our hearts Bonded with admiration that never departs. As your eager vibes pronounce our love anew Every word of passion draws me closer to you Conveying me to fervent places I never knew Craving for your touch as our feelings renew. Discourse of love resonates with adoring smile As we revel in romantic talk avidly fragile And echo of our minds reverberates with a sigh Enamored in angelic love that will never die. November 17, 2017 Whisper Sweet Nothings Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

George Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 7:22 PM
This an excellent poem charged with passion and emotion. I see here the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings of love as the lovers freely open their hearts and engage in the exchange of romantic gestures. These lovers, truly revel in romance.... ! Into my FAV.
Barden Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Vijay - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Greg!
Schiavina Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Congratulation on your win Vijay. That's a beautiful well constructed poem. I am happy you won.
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Frances!
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Line!
Bateman Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Hello Vijay, Thanks for your recent read of my new Rondeau poem!! And congratulations also on your First Place Contest Win. I can see why "Whispers" was picked for first-place. It's an extraordinary romantic write and is brilliantly written!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Gary!
Mccall Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Vijay. What a darling piece of poetry I especially love the last line. well done good poet well done.
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Edward!
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 1:39 PM
- Congratulations on this wonderful romantic poem, Vijay - Really enjoy reading - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
May Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 3:01 AM
How divinely romantic dearest, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Many thanks friend--see you soon in this space!
Gupta Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Fascinating love poem ... Great ...
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Probir!
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:26 PM
radiant love poem, vijay...i like!...huggs
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Thank you nette!
Ashley Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Very romantic and lovely Vijay and your rhymes are excellent as always. Wishing you the best for a contest win my friend!
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Susan!
La France Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Vijay, a beautiful love poem, best of luck in the contest !
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thank you BW!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:55 PM
so romantic and lovely.
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Richard!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Your lovely poem expresses the passion only romantic love can provide Vijay! Beautiful! : )
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Connie!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Pure romanticism poetically personified, Vijay. You and my beloved friend, Chris Green are true Romance kings. Listening to "Peace of Mind" by Jerald Daemyon and reading this elegantly expressed poem is a transcendent experience. Beautiful quatrain. Love and joy always.
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Thank you Freddie!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:56 AM
A beautiful write Vijay! A true romantic! GL for a win!
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Thank you Kim!
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:33 AM
A very beautifully written romantic poem Vijay! Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Absolutely gorgeous Vijay, my best to you in the contest! xomo
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Thank you Maureen!
Michael Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Ok Vijay...You're getting romantic...I call it a revival...Lovely poem...keep it coming
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Thank you Arturo!
Canerdy Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Lovely, dramatically romantic write, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Janice!
May Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Beautiful romantic write Vijay...best wishes in the contest
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Sivey Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Oh, this is so beautiful Vijay! I felt the passion and sentimentality within this heartfelt poem! What an ingenious work of art my friend! You have encapsulated what love means within a romantic atmosphere...whispering sweet nothings is quite the pleasurable thing, with love all around you, what a delightful piece! This write made me want to hold onto my wife with all my heart and whisper tenderly into her ears....then bite them playfully (that could be another poem altogether)! Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Many thanks Russell--enjoyed reading your comment about holding on to your wife!
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Very romantic my friend and once again great rhymes.. some lovely romantic lines... Good luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Silent One!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace