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Whispers

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Eternity never seems to last Viewing life through misty windows October winds wrapping fears Love dancing with lonely tears Lost in dreams Other illusions scream Voyages all but gone Eternal voices, lay me to rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 10/29/2017 10:44:00 PM
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Arthur, what a beautifully scripted masterpiece. Speaks volumes and the emotions just pour through each verse. A very moving read. You've also painted an awesome picture!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/24/2017 8:40:00 PM
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Beautifully rhythmic, fantastic first line and a wondrous write arthur...
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/20/2017 3:00:00 PM
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I wish eternity would last to enjoy what is really worth living for.. so very deep in though my friend ... awesome like always. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/20/2017 2:28:00 PM
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WoW! Arthur, This is deep and makes one think. It conjures up a threshold of emotions. Excellent job my talented friend:-) Alexis
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 10/19/2017 7:44:00 AM
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Soft and mellow poem, Arthur, enjoyed:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:35:00 PM
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Thank you kindly Jo Daniel!
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Sara Ella
Date: 10/18/2017 8:26:00 AM
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Very nice Arthur - I reads like a song :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:20:00 PM
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Thank you Sara hugs!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/18/2017 3:32:00 AM
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melancholia at its finest..arthur, this can be turned into a song; truly lovely!..huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:20:00 PM
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Thank you so much nette!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/18/2017 1:12:00 AM
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Indeed, Arthur, the passage of time coats that youthful optimism with the rust of age. A fine write. Regards, Viv
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:24:00 AM
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Thanks Viv!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2017 3:41:00 PM
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I remember feeling like this when I was young! Lovely poem, Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:23:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 12:32:00 PM
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Great work Arthur...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:23:00 AM
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Thanks Charlie
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 8:35:00 AM
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Love Love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:23:00 AM
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Thank thank you
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 6:16:00 AM
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The paradoxical first line drew me in - love your poem!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:23:00 AM
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Thank you Agnes
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 3:08:00 AM
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Wonderful poem my friend, I love it :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2017 1:22:00 AM
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Thanks Darren!

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