Arthur Vaso Poet Quatrain

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Whispers

Eternity never seems to last
Viewing life through misty windows
October winds wrapping fears
Love dancing with lonely tears

Lost in dreams
Other illusions scream
Voyages all but gone
Eternal voices, lay me to rest

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Suzanne C. Goudreau October 29, 2017 at 10:44 PM Arthur, what a beautifully scripted masterpiece. Speaks volumes and the emotions just pour through each verse. A very moving read. You've also painted an awesome picture!

Susan Ashley October 24, 2017 at 8:40 PM Beautifully rhythmic, fantastic first line and a wondrous write arthur...

Eve Roper October 20, 2017 at 3:00 PM I wish eternity would last to enjoy what is really worth living for.. so very deep in though my friend ... awesome like always. Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y. October 20, 2017 at 2:28 PM WoW! Arthur, This is deep and makes one think. It conjures up a threshold of emotions. Excellent job my talented friend:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel October 19, 2017 at 7:44 AM Soft and mellow poem, Arthur, enjoyed:) Arthur Vaso October 19, 2017 at 8:35 PM Thank you kindly Jo Daniel!

Sara Ella October 18, 2017 at 8:26 AM Very nice Arthur - I reads like a song :) Arthur Vaso October 19, 2017 at 8:20 PM Thank you Sara hugs!

Nette Onclaud October 18, 2017 at 3:32 AM melancholia at its finest..arthur, this can be turned into a song; truly lovely!..huggs Arthur Vaso October 19, 2017 at 8:20 PM Thank you so much nette!

Viv Wigley October 18, 2017 at 1:12 AM Indeed, Arthur, the passage of time coats that youthful optimism with the rust of age. A fine write. Regards, Viv Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:24 AM Thanks Viv!

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2017 at 3:41 PM I remember feeling like this when I was young! Lovely poem, Arthur Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thanks Andrea

Charlie Smith October 17, 2017 at 12:32 PM Great work Arthur... Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thanks Charlie

Tim Smith October 17, 2017 at 8:35 AM Love Love it. Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thank thank you

Agnes Krampe October 17, 2017 at 6:16 AM The paradoxical first line drew me in - love your poem! Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thank you Agnes

Darren White October 17, 2017 at 3:08 AM Wonderful poem my friend, I love it :) Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:22 AM Thanks Darren!