Whispers

Tomorrow they’ll come
To tear it down,
This house I lived in
At the edge of town

All around me
In the fusty air
Are the voices of others
Who once were there

“Yes?”  I answer
And look around
But I see no one's
To be found.

Whispers follow
In empty rooms,
A hint of fragrance
Of long dead blooms,

The faintest melody
Floats on high.
Do I hear a waltz?
A lover’s sigh?

Little footsteps
On the stair,
Glimpse in the mirror
Of golden hair,

Smell of iron on
Fresh starched clothes,
A whiff of roast
Tickles the nose.

Here are the ghosts
Of yesterday
Here my childhood
Memories play

Tomorrow the building
Itself will be gone
But whispers of the past
Will still live on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on having this one featured on homepage. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Several of the homes that I lived in after we had moved away burned down and that makes it seem like part of my life was lost. Sara K
Peckham Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Thanks for your cogent comment. I really appreciate it. This poem was actually not inspired by a house I lived in. Where I lived on Martha's Vineyard for twenty years, there were houses I would see abandoned, and one in particular inspired this poem.
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Barbara. Yes, it might be a heart-wrenching experience to leave your home behind, but at least you carry fond memories in your heart to where ever you go. Hope you will be as happy in Nebraska (detail from your blog).
Peckham Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Thank you for the welcome. I am happy here, e even though I would rather have stayed on Martha's Vineyard. But you are right. I have lovely memories.
Kaufman Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 8:07 AM
I like this poem and feel that your memories will keep this home alive for a long, long time. Welcome to poetry soup. There are some very warm and supportive poets out there as well as talented ones. Hope you enjoy the site.
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