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Whispers -Responce/Inspired By James Downing's Rebirth-

To once fall from skies, surrounded in a sea of lies, the chaos untamed, once i would but remain unnamed, tears falling brisk, i swore i wouldnt go down like this, lost and left alone, my poor cumbeling home, the red bled from my fate, but still i would remain unnamed; the fire burned smooth, the peace started to rule, scars fading away, walking on day after day, never i thought, would i meet my other heart, and day after day, things would no longer remain the same, id wait for his words, to bring me from war, to bring me to peace, my pain finally released, carried away on the wind, washed away in the rain; id wait to speak, wanting just one thing, to see him, feel his kiss, waiting like this, hope finnaly letting me see, this probably, most likely, just couldnt be; tears fall from my skies, cause my angel did cry, his wings spread out over space, i beg him not to hide his face, only to see, these tears too come from me, once lost then found, he left my name to fall upon the ground, understood me, carried me when i was too beat, held my heart in his hands, through sweet little dream land, placed upon my lips, a distant kiss, and on the wind i hear my true name, as my love, he whispers in his dreams .:Rain:.

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Date: 3/27/2010 9:35:00 PM
Ths is above and beyond anything emotional, and light as a feather poem. So distance, but very vivid. I have enjoyed the poem. I will enjoy more of your poems 2marrow..See ya. S.k.a.t r
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:40:00 AM
hmm...this is good :)
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