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When your mind shuns flattery's lies, it opens, letting the truth in. And mutes all the varied voices of fear secluded deep within. You know of love only through dreams, where hope's crumbling walls are rebuilt. And the sanctuary of sleep banishes whisperings of guilt. The mind's a fantasy playground filled with flashes of second sight. And skeletons of memories time's acid tears have bleached bone white. Tricksters and angels coexist quelling echoes of silent screams. And they speak the language of trust, in reality's world of dreams. Angels abhor the emptiness that eats away at lonely hearts. And try to fill that void with smiles that gather; as each new day starts. (Quatrain) 5/6/2015

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Date: 2/27/2018 12:06:00 PM
Love all the rich imagery, particularly the lines "Cupid abhors the emptiness that languishes in lonely hearts." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 5/12/2015 5:35:00 PM
Profound and beautifully rhymed. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 5/12/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 5/12/2015 2:50:00 PM
Back with cograts..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:27:00 PM
What depth in this write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:25:00 AM
Such deep contemplation in your words, Emile. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 6:16:00 PM
My oh my. What stunning lines you have created here Emile. Stanzas to savour for sure. Congrats on the win and a fave for me
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 11:06:00 AM
A sweet win....SKAT
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 10:10:00 AM
This has so many elements, so many voices, that speak in every human mind. Sometimes we cannot quiet them when we would like. Well done, Emile !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Carrie, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 9:59:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on the high win. Enjoy today with blessings..Linda
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks as always, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 8:20:00 AM
beautiful deep write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 12:53:00 PM
Wow! You have said it all, wonderfully written a 7++ and a sure win. Bless you
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
Deep contemplation. Beautiful poem.#7
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 11:17:00 AM
such depth and spirit in this piece which allows me to relish the stillness of the heart. i'm a rumi fan, emile, and you just did him right!.. wow.. huggs
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Date: 5/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, I am grateful for your kind words. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 8:50:00 AM
Great job! I loved your poem.
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 8:39:00 AM
Very clever, deep write! Beautifully written!!
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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