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Whisperings of Guilt

When your heart shuns flattery's lies, it opens and lets the truth in. And time mutes the varied voices fear once amplified deep within. You know of love's magic through dreams, where hope's crumbling walls get rebuilt. And the sanctuary of sleep banishes whisperings of guilt. Your mind's a fantasy playground; filled with flashes of second sight. And skeletons of memories, time's acid tears, have bleached bone white. Tricksters and Angels coexist; within echoes of silent screams. And weave wishes with silver threads; in reality's world of dreams. Tricksters spin what you want to hear their prime motivator is lust. And like a whisper in the wind their words are not tethered to trust. Angels detest the emptiness that eats away at lonely hearts. And try to fill your heart with smiles; they gather as each new day starts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Love all the rich imagery, particularly the lines "Cupid abhors the emptiness that languishes in lonely hearts." Well done, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Profound and beautifully rhymed. Congrats in the contest.
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Back with cograts..Sara
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate it. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:27 PM
What depth in this write. Congratulations on your win.
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate it. Emile.
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Such deep contemplation in your words, Emile. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate it. Emile.
Trichet Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 6:16 PM
My oh my. What stunning lines you have created here Emile. Stanzas to savour for sure. Congrats on the win and a fave for me
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 11:06 AM
A sweet win....SKAT
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate it. Emile.
Richards Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:10 AM
This has so many elements, so many voices, that speak in every human mind. Sometimes we cannot quiet them when we would like. Well done, Emile !! Congrats on your win !!
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thanks Carrie, I appreciate it. Emile.
A   Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Emile, Congratulations on the high win. Enjoy today with blessings..Linda
Pinet Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Thanks as always, Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:20 AM
beautiful deep write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Wow! You have said it all, wonderfully written a 7++ and a sure win. Bless you
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Deep contemplation. Beautiful poem.#7
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 11:17 AM
such depth and spirit in this piece which allows me to relish the stillness of the heart. i'm a rumi fan, emile, and you just did him right!.. wow.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Thanks so much Nette, I am grateful for your kind words. Emile.
Ray Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Great job! I loved your poem.
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Hopper Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Very clever, deep write! Beautifully written!!
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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