Whisperings of Guilt

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When your heart shuns flattery's lies, it opens and lets the truth in. And time mutes the varied voices fear once amplified deep within. You know of love's magic through dreams, where hope's crumbling walls get rebuilt. And the sanctuary of sleep banishes whisperings of guilt. Your mind's a fantasy playground; filled with flashes of second sight. And skeletons of memories, time's acid tears, have bleached bone white. Tricksters and Angels coexist; within echoes of silent screams. And weave wishes with silver threads; in reality's world of dreams. Tricksters spin what you want to hear their prime motivator is lust. And like a whisper in the wind their words are not tethered to trust. Angels detest the emptiness that eats away at lonely hearts. And try to fill your heart with smiles; they gather as each new day starts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/27/2018 12:06:00 PM
Love all the rich imagery, particularly the lines "Cupid abhors the emptiness that languishes in lonely hearts." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 5/12/2015 5:35:00 PM
Profound and beautifully rhymed. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 5/12/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 5/12/2015 2:50:00 PM
Back with cograts..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:27:00 PM
What depth in this write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:25:00 AM
Such deep contemplation in your words, Emile. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 6:16:00 PM
My oh my. What stunning lines you have created here Emile. Stanzas to savour for sure. Congrats on the win and a fave for me
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 11:06:00 AM
A sweet win....SKAT
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 10:10:00 AM
This has so many elements, so many voices, that speak in every human mind. Sometimes we cannot quiet them when we would like. Well done, Emile !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Carrie, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 9:59:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on the high win. Enjoy today with blessings..Linda
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks as always, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 8:20:00 AM
beautiful deep write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 12:53:00 PM
Wow! You have said it all, wonderfully written a 7++ and a sure win. Bless you
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
Deep contemplation. Beautiful poem.#7
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 11:17:00 AM
such depth and spirit in this piece which allows me to relish the stillness of the heart. i'm a rumi fan, emile, and you just did him right!.. wow.. huggs
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Date: 5/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, I am grateful for your kind words. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 8:50:00 AM
Great job! I loved your poem.
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2015 8:39:00 AM
Very clever, deep write! Beautifully written!!
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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