Whispering Winds

"whispering winds"

rain falls where the sun must shine
moments and days cast their beauty

once upon a time it was said 
where there is good there is bad
where there is light there is darkness
there could not be one without the other

as you recall the once upon statement
turn painful into desirable
turn sombre into illumination
have the opposite be a state of mind

frosty strikes when warmth must blanket
these phases travel whispering winds

SkyWatcher
05-10-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Callus Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Life offers opposing visuals and emotions, Lisa, as you ably say in this poem. Life is a mixture of bittersweet, and we learn to accept and live with each different moment. ~ Warm regards // paul
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May 25, 2021 at 10:21 AM
It does seem to be the way of all humanity and its nature -- perhaps there can ever be sunshine, and its appreciation without an opposite to make us take notice. I think, sadly, we will always be what we declare. But I can always dream. Thought provoking poem, Lisa. Have a beautiful day!
Ricci Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Good Morning Joe - It is very nice to meet you. I am so sorry for the late response to your most gracious and wonderful review. I appreciate your commentary and input on my entry and your thoughts have truth as well. May we all keep dreaming so we can endure. Thank you again. Never do I take visits or commentary for granted. Enjoy poetry and poetry soup. I look forward to turning to your page very soon.
Sands Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Beautifully written Lisa :)
Ricci Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Hello Heidi - Thank you very much. Truly. I'm very sorry for the late response. Have a wonderful day and enjoy poetry soup.
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Loved your last line, especially! Pangie xx
Ricci Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 12:27 AM
Good Morning Pangie. I'm very sorry for the late response. I've been away from the computer. Thank you for telling me of the last line. I very much appreciate that. I'm going to be away from the computer for a few more days so until then keep enjoying poetry soup and I will see you on your page very soon.
Bilgic Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:27 AM
your soul is very nice your poems are wonderful
Ricci Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 12:24 AM
Hello Semih. Thank you very much for such a gracious commentary and intake which is so kind of you to say. I owe thanks to my grandmother for my soul. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry soup. I'm very sorry for this late response.
Horsman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 6:52 PM
This is truly wonderful poetry, Lisa. One can feel the atmosphere in each word..
Ricci Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 12:20 AM
Hi Harry Good Morning. I'm so sorry for the late response. I've been away from the computer once again. I so appreciate your gracious and wonderful review. Truly. Thank you Thank you. May this day find you well. I will see you on your page. Keep enjoying poetry soup.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:38 PM
Rain and sun usually bring on a rainbow. A sight to see. Opposites are often illuminating. Well expressed. Blessings.
Ricci Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 1:50 AM
Good Morning Victor - Thank you very much. I love the rainbow look. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry soup. Blessings always.
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