Whispered Words

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Written: January 08, 2024
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Thin walls allow us to hear whispers
"..you are enough...."
everything fall 
      and        rise again
muted by 
           the light 
                     of mystery
                           mirage-filled 
                                  with milky 
                                       white cocoon
engulfed 
        in an abyss 
                of mental      chaos
playing in the mist with crazy doe eyes                 
                       squishy 
                 squashy
                         flabby 
                 flaccid
                        fleshy
                 plushy
 window to untamed 
                p
                 o
                e
                  t
                r
                 y
              verse
                  by
              verse

   If I were a verse    
   of strain remold
    will craft rhyme
          out of 
           sync
          words
      that blend
    and flow with
  gossamer shades
 and resourceful style

whispers in the breeze might tease
curves of truth, naked muse craving appease
I catch divine whispers that spur me to seize.
merge in harmony with the breeze and trees

lyrics kissed by 
            moonlit madness
                       wind howls 
                               through its 
                                       ghostly lips
                                              a branch 
                                    threatens 
                            to break
             there's wisdom
planted in the soil 
         of a thirsty earth
                 a curious mind 
                       shrouded 
                              in mystic prophecy

divine light spilling out from punctured scars
my muse hiding from the rays
chest crowded with moans & dust particles
heartstrings pulled by a dapper rose

beguiling my sanity
           whispers seep 
                       into carousel dreams
                                 magical words
                                             jade at afterglow
                                                               squawking  
                                 to universe

   poetry:     feels         heals         reveals 
   clearly
      ecstasy
             Is
                 a
                     symphony!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/10/2024 5:49:00 PM
Oh I really like the arrangement of words here,so fascinating and beautifully flowing..Those 'whispered words' have delicately carved a tapestry of emotions and poetic artistry, dear Sotto.A truly remarkable write and one of my most FAVs from you as this poem speaks a lot about its immense depth.."muted by the light of mystery mirage-filled with milky white cocoon"Those alliterations are spellbinding and serene! Heartiest congratulations to you on the beautiful win, absolutely loved reading this
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:33:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/9/2024 12:07:00 PM
This poem is very creative in the poetic nature of the words, which as always are vivid and imaginative.. The design is also very creative and, I am sure the contest judge will love it... BOL in contest..
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:42:00 AM
Lasaad, your form caught my eye and I was off and running with your muse! very nice!
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Date: 1/9/2024 7:09:00 AM
Creative, artful--splendid images you convey my friend.
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:34:00 PM
Ah dr sotto, how creatively you’ve done the arrangement of words here and the flow of your very descriptive lines here stands out really! Im sure this will do very well in brians contest. I love especially the way youve written “ If I were a verse of strain remold will craft rhyme out of sync” How deeply moving and heartfelt are your words woven in sheer artistic eloquence! And the ending is brilliant too. And i agree poetry feels heals and reveals so much when the world is deaf!FAV
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:52:00 PM
The form is engaging and the poem itself is very beautiful as is the photo. I have favorite lines the last few and the ones about wisdom and the earth. You are an amazing artist!
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