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Written: January 08, 2024 ________________________________________ Thin walls allow us to hear whispers "..you are enough...." everything fall and rise again muted by the light of mystery mirage-filled with milky white cocoon engulfed in an abyss of mental chaos playing in the mist with crazy doe eyes squishy squashy flabby flaccid fleshy plushy window to untamed p o e t r y verse by verse If I were a verse of strain remold will craft rhyme out of sync words that blend and flow with gossamer shades and resourceful style whispers in the breeze might tease curves of truth, naked muse craving appease I catch divine whispers that spur me to seize. merge in harmony with the breeze and trees lyrics kissed by moonlit madness wind howls through its ghostly lips a branch threatens to break there's wisdom planted in the soil of a thirsty earth a curious mind shrouded in mystic prophecy divine light spilling out from punctured scars my muse hiding from the rays chest crowded with moans & dust particles heartstrings pulled by a dapper rose beguiling my sanity whispers seep into carousel dreams magical words jade at afterglow squawking to universe poetry: feels heals reveals clearly ecstasy Is a symphony!

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Date: 1/10/2024 5:49:00 PM
Oh I really like the arrangement of words here,so fascinating and beautifully flowing..Those 'whispered words' have delicately carved a tapestry of emotions and poetic artistry, dear Sotto.A truly remarkable write and one of my most FAVs from you as this poem speaks a lot about its immense depth.."muted by the light of mystery mirage-filled with milky white cocoon"Those alliterations are spellbinding and serene! Heartiest congratulations to you on the beautiful win, absolutely loved reading this
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:33:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/9/2024 12:07:00 PM
This poem is very creative in the poetic nature of the words, which as always are vivid and imaginative.. The design is also very creative and, I am sure the contest judge will love it... BOL in contest..
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:42:00 AM
Lasaad, your form caught my eye and I was off and running with your muse! very nice!
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Date: 1/9/2024 7:09:00 AM
Creative, artful--splendid images you convey my friend.
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Date: 1/9/2024 5:14:00 AM
I love what you've done with this form of poetry! The lines flowed easily and the messages clear. Indeed, poetry is a symphony! I especially liked these lines: If I were a verse of strain remold will craft rhyme out of sync words. Your poem was inspirational and touced my poetic heart. Have a great day, dear Sotto...your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:34:00 PM
Ah dr sotto, how creatively you’ve done the arrangement of words here and the flow of your very descriptive lines here stands out really! Im sure this will do very well in brians contest. I love especially the way youve written “ If I were a verse of strain remold will craft rhyme out of sync” How deeply moving and heartfelt are your words woven in sheer artistic eloquence! And the ending is brilliant too. And i agree poetry feels heals and reveals so much when the world is deaf!FAV
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:52:00 PM
The form is engaging and the poem itself is very beautiful as is the photo. I have favorite lines the last few and the ones about wisdom and the earth. You are an amazing artist!
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:24:00 PM
this one is physical journey of the aesthetic - beautifully expressed
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