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Whiskey Glasses and Bathroom Mirrors

Two o'clock she hits me hard 
I salute to another captain 
look around and swallow hard 

Not as hard as you leaving 
hitting me straight between the eyes 
stars spinning right after midnight 
can't remember exactly why 

Whispers filled the empty cauldron 
along with a pint of homemade wine 
life already was a struggle living 
now what am I going to do with all this time 

Whiskey glasses and bathroom mirrors 
keep on holding back the cries 
another pent up night in Georgia 
running scared and telling lies 

Come on back before the summer 
when my troubles will be unclothed 
sprinkle love upon these shoulders 
before this man has decomposed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 10:56 AM
So sad :)
Dunbar Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 11:01 PM
Love will help you find your way. A love to last.
Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Great to see this poem of the day! Great poet, great poem, email me!!!!
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:54 PM
I am a proffesinal poem writer. I want you to work for me ASAP. Contact me on [email protected]. Cant wait to get in contact Tim!! Has to be an EMAIL
B. Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Tim, this is such a fantastic poem! Congratulations on receiving POTD. Faving this one. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Cheers to this one Tim! Fabulous write :) Congrats on potd xomo!
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Most of us drink to feel different, I'm pretty sure that most times that's not a terrible thing. Congratulations for a great write and for POTD honors...
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:55 PM
i AGREE SIR!!!!!!!!!!!
Yvonne Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Wow Tim, this is one of your best. Just excellent. You inspire me to do better with my work. This is a HUGE FAV.
Wanter Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Willie Nelson, watch out! Great song, Tim. Congratulations!
Turner Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:09 AM
If you're drinking with the captain at least you're not drinking alone:) Congratulations Tim on POTD honors:)
Wood Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:57 AM
I like this poem. A very down-to-earth real feel to this one. Congratulations on POTD. - Dean
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:36 AM
- Sad thoughts but beautifully written, Tim - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Just coming back to congratulate you on your potd :)
May Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 5:28 AM
Amber swirls wont leave you composed..Congrats on POtd
Williams Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Congrats on getting POTD Tim.... Maria
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Yay, PotD, grats Tim :D
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Lovely to see this making POTD, Tim! Good stuff mate
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 9:17 PM
I dare say the Captain be pleased to read this. I Have a few friends myself who drink Captain Morgan! :)
Murray Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 5:20 PM
A pint of homemade wine? Glad this is fictional Tim. Otherwise it would drive me to drink!
Pettit Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 4:37 PM
This is a very imaginative write. Good descriptiveness and rhyming.
Downing  Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 9:50 AM
A sad write but like everyone says, beautifully written... hugs to you and wishing you sunshine :)
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Man, this is so well written, it jums straight in the faves folder. That last stanza! wow...
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 7:31 PM
A bleak and sad poem but well done, Tim!
Walker Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 4:57 PM
heart broken, lonely, struggling to quench the pain while still holding onto hope. Sad, but well written Tim !
Lawless Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:45 PM
that last stanza....an expose of the loneliness of hope....this should be in the "bleak" or "deep" contest....
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