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Whiskey Glasses and Bathroom Mirrors

Two o'clock she hits me hard I salute to another captain look around and swallow hard Not as hard as you leaving hitting me straight between the eyes stars spinning right after midnight can't remember exactly why Whispers filled the empty cauldron along with a pint of homemade wine life already was a struggle living now what am I going to do with all this time Whiskey glasses and bathroom mirrors keep on holding back the cries another pent up night in Georgia running scared and telling lies Come on back before the summer when my troubles will be unclothed sprinkle love upon these shoulders before this man has decomposed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 10:56:00 AM
So sad :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 11:01:00 PM
Love will help you find your way. A love to last.
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Date: 6/7/2017 10:25:00 PM
Great to see this poem of the day! Great poet, great poem, email me!!!!
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Date: 6/7/2017 8:54:00 PM
I am a proffesinal poem writer. I want you to work for me ASAP. Contact me on deanwhite315@gmail.com. Cant wait to get in contact Tim!! Has to be an EMAIL
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Date: 6/7/2017 6:32:00 PM
Tim, this is such a fantastic poem! Congratulations on receiving POTD. Faving this one. :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 12:53:00 PM
Cheers to this one Tim! Fabulous write :) Congrats on potd xomo!
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Date: 6/7/2017 11:39:00 AM
Most of us drink to feel different, I'm pretty sure that most times that's not a terrible thing. Congratulations for a great write and for POTD honors...
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Date: 6/7/2017 8:55:00 PM
i AGREE SIR!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 6/7/2017 10:42:00 AM
Wow Tim, this is one of your best. Just excellent. You inspire me to do better with my work. This is a HUGE FAV.
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Date: 6/7/2017 10:09:00 AM
If you're drinking with the captain at least you're not drinking alone:) Congratulations Tim on POTD honors:)
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Date: 6/7/2017 10:09:00 AM
Willie Nelson, watch out! Great song, Tim. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2017 9:57:00 AM
I like this poem. A very down-to-earth real feel to this one. Congratulations on POTD. - Dean
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Date: 6/7/2017 8:36:00 AM
- Sad thoughts but beautifully written, Tim - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 8:14:00 AM
Just coming back to congratulate you on your potd :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 5:28:00 AM
Amber swirls wont leave you composed..Congrats on POtd
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Date: 6/7/2017 3:54:00 AM
Congrats on getting POTD Tim.... Maria
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:58:00 AM
Yay, PotD, grats Tim :D
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:27:00 AM
Lovely to see this making POTD, Tim! Good stuff mate
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:17:00 PM
I dare say the Captain be pleased to read this. I Have a few friends myself who drink Captain Morgan! :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 5:20:00 PM
A pint of homemade wine? Glad this is fictional Tim. Otherwise it would drive me to drink!
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:37:00 PM
This is a very imaginative write. Good descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:50:00 AM
A sad write but like everyone says, beautifully written... hugs to you and wishing you sunshine :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:04:00 AM
Man, this is so well written, it jums straight in the faves folder. That last stanza! wow...
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Date: 6/5/2017 7:31:00 PM
A bleak and sad poem but well done, Tim!
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Date: 6/5/2017 4:57:00 PM
heart broken, lonely, struggling to quench the pain while still holding onto hope. Sad, but well written Tim !
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Date: 6/5/2017 3:45:00 PM
that last stanza....an expose of the loneliness of hope....this should be in the "bleak" or "deep" contest....
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