Whimsical

Hummingbirds gather, sipping nectar,
wings buzzing as they rapidly flutter.
Fun, feisty and fearless visitors,
treasured enchanting moments.

A bright ruby throated male, 
perched waiting for his mate.
Sweet chirping as he preens, 
vibrant emerald feathers glow.

Pale green, shimmery feathers appear,
sipping nectar, her wings start to flutter.
Now chasing, a playful courtship show,
like bright gems dancing in midair.

Dancing, zipping, soon soaring,
in a flash, landing in a tree.
Sweet chirping sounds emit, 
so wonderfully whimsical!

Contest: Marathon Mile 12 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mcintosh Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 3:37 AM
I love it! Yes, whimsical and beautiful. A joy filled write. God bless you. Love, Gina
Kitchin Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Gina, thank you!
Horsman Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:09 AM
Never seen a Hummingbird in real life, Tania, your wonderful poems goes a long way to introduce this reader to one..Lovely poetry.
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Harry, thank you!
Horsman Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:10 AM
Oh and congratulation on POTD,
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 11:28 AM
A wondrous, whimsical gathering of hummingbirds! Congratulations on POTD!
Kitchin Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 4:11 PM
Kim, thank you!
George Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Humming birds are perhaps the cutest of all birds. Their puny size and agile movements are a pleasure to watch ! Your poem has captured the beautiful courtship of a pair of humming birds. Really enjoyed their aerobatic feats ! Congratulations Tania on your POTD honor
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Valsa, thank you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 2:01 AM
Your poem was a treat to read Tania. I am so happy that it was honored for POTD. Congratulations! Well deserved. Blessings xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Connie, thank you!
Meadows Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 11:49 PM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD.
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 5:01 AM
Jeanette, thank you!
Nicole Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 5:32 PM
Watching hummingbirds flutter about, is such a magical experience. Your thoughts take me there. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Tania, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Brandy, thank you!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 2:35 PM
A delightful poem about hummingbirds Tania, we don’t get them here in the UK I’m sorry to say. Congratulations on your free verse being honoured as poem of the day… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Belle, thank you!
Hankins Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Such a delightful poem, Tania. I felt like I was watching the feisty hummingbirds with you. Very nice!
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 2:05 PM
Milt, thank you!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations, on your POTD honour, Tania. I love watching birds, especially Hummingbirds. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Mala, thank you, it was a wonderful surprise!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations for your POTD win. I love your "Whimsical" write. Hummingbirds are so small and pretty. A joy to watch. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Paula, thank you!
Jayasankar Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Tania, congratulations on your POTD honor with this beautiful write... Hugs... ~ Ani
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Anitha, thank you!
La France Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Tania, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Constance, thank you!
Romios Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 8:11 AM
A perfect choice for POTD! Panagiota XXX
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Pangie, thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:28 AM
My heartfelt congratulations for your POTD.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Victor, thank you!
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 5:52 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Tania. Your poem brings forth such wonderful images of the bird--lovely write! Enjoy your day.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Vijay, thank you!
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Described well, as I see it here too. Beautifully written. Enjoy :)
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Heidi, thank you!
Fowler Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 4:59 AM
An enchanting write Tania. Like fairies in the air, the hummers are such a sweet sight. Congratulations on your POTD! Linda
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Linda, thank you!
Logan Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 4:19 AM
I am so pleased to see one of your poems recognized as the poem of the day, Tania! Congratulations. I don't think I've ever seen a hummingbird when it wasn't fluttering it wings.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Jenna, thank you!
Tor Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations Tania I love this Hummingbird Poem. They are wonderful to watch and you have described them how I watch them. Congratulations on receiving POTD.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Michael, thank you!
May Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:14 AM
They are the 'bright gems' of summer, Wonderful write Tania, Congrats on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Joe, thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 12:36 AM
Back with big congratulations Tania on POTD, a well deserved honour, have a great day. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Tom, thank you, it was a nice surprise!
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 11:11 AM
whimsical and so special this is in nature!!
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Andrea, thank you!
Leffanta Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Watching hummingbird mating rituals is indeed beautiful and fascinating. Enjoyed! Aloha!
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Rico, thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 10:26 AM
You paint a delightful scene with your words Tania. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Tom, thank you, hope all is well with you too!
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