James Fraser Poet Tanka

Whilst Gentle Sighs Echo

With thine hands I touch ~
Gentle sighs echo within,
whilst crimson lips touch ~
Unconventional writhes quake,
amidst satin sheets are we ~
 










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Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2011 at 11:17 PM ooooh, a sexy one!

Robert Pettit February 12, 2011 at 8:50 AM It would be awfully difficult to write a better tanka than this one. Overall, very descriptive and pleasing to read.

C.C Bloomsfield February 12, 2011 at 2:58 AM delicate and beautiful,extremely romantic

James Marshall Goff February 11, 2011 at 4:41 PM peaceful, lovely....jimbo