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Shadows like fireflies play tonight As dappled waves reflect moon's light ; Wing-like, they glide along to flow In breathless, mysterious glow. Their prism of greens and mild blues Morphs the shore into tinted hues, Feathery with bright rafters spanned Ignite my face at their command. That along magical raybeams; My fantasies are held in dreams. 11/12/2015 Contest: Shadows At Night ~ syllable count and end rhymes checked through www.howmaysyllables.com and rhymezone.com Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 11/16/2015 8:59:00 AM
Lovely Couplets Nette. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/16/2015 3:50:00 AM
A well-deserved win! i am happy for you, Nette ... CayCay
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:16:00 AM
A beautiful win. SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:11:00 AM
Popping back with a huge congratulations : )
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Date: 11/15/2015 10:47:00 PM
Wonderful write, Nette, congratulations on your win ! :)
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:10:00 PM
Congrats on your fine first place win!! I knew this poem was gold!
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:15:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking Nette many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2015 1:38:00 PM
congrats on a superb poem Nette and your well earned 1st place hugs
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:19:00 AM
This poem is beautiful ... CayCay
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Date: 11/12/2015 10:50:00 PM
I like this shadow dance. Perfect poetry!
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Date: 11/12/2015 11:16:00 AM
nette, your poem is beautiful as only you can do, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 11/12/2015 9:04:00 AM
You presented an image feast and the delivery was smooth as silk! A7 Good luck in Shadow's contest.
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Date: 11/12/2015 8:56:00 AM
Well, this kind of shadow truly enchants. Once again, an outstanding poem that flows, glows!
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Date: 11/12/2015 8:45:00 AM
Beauty's lullaby for the heart your poem is, dear nette! Superb! Good luck!
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Date: 11/12/2015 1:37:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking imagery. I simply loved every single line!
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