While Poets Sleep

Muses stray, as darkness beguiles the light
While poets sleep there casts a shadowed pall 
Enchanted prose now languishing in blight  
Night’s spell has ways of vexing what has been  
Verse once unbowed is now seduced to crawl
The baleful Nyx has cast her nightly spin

The poet’s lot - to reignite the flame
The life inscribed in daylights metered rays
Are listless words as gloaming’s curse has tamed  
Exhort your pen dear bard and foray hence
Win back this forlorn script from night’s malaise
Restore the sculpted word to present tense

Muses stray, as darkness beguiles the light
The poet’s lot - to reignite the flame


Note – Nyx (Greek Goddess of the Night)
For Cornish Sonnet Contest – 16 Mar 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/15/2014 7:05:00 PM
This poem is beautiful hun-Love Ettie
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David Mohn
Date: 5/15/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Ettie....I appreciate you stopping by and the kind comment
Date: 4/12/2014 4:04:00 AM
Well written David ! A great win, congrats !
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Date: 4/13/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thank You Dr. Upma...I appreciate the comment
Date: 4/12/2014 1:50:00 AM
Well done Dave ...Seren
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David Mohn
Date: 4/13/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Seren :)
Date: 4/11/2014 10:36:00 PM
DAVID, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/13/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thank You SKAT...I appreciate your comments
Date: 4/11/2014 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations, David... a nice win...LInda
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David Mohn
Date: 4/11/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Linda...It was a challenging form to work with
Date: 4/11/2014 7:27:00 PM
wonderful message in this. What you came up with for the couplet at the end. Good one and congrats.
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David Mohn
Date: 4/11/2014 10:08:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...It was fun to try a new form. I value your comments
Date: 4/11/2014 6:10:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congratulations .Love, Joyce
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David Mohn
Date: 4/11/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thanks Joyce...I appreciate the kind words
Date: 4/11/2014 5:19:00 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara
Date: 4/11/2014 1:31:00 PM
Excellent wording, certainly creates an atmpsphere we can all understand. Congrats on your placement
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David Mohn
Date: 4/11/2014 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Amy for the kind words
Date: 4/11/2014 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on a poem to which many of us are bound to relate; good write David...your flame is still burning :) // paul
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul...you are always so encouraging
Date: 3/16/2014 2:45:00 PM
Well penned...best wishes
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David Mohn
Date: 3/17/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Joseph...I appreciate your comment
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