While Flowers Die

"Dead leaves lay still until the wind takes them

         here and there:  even the last flower is withered:

                         yet there is a beauty in decay. " 

                                            Quote by _Constance La France 



Although her body rots beneath the earth,

her happy soul awaits its second birth.



* I was thinking of a line in Charles Wesley's 'Hark, the herald angels sing': "Born to give them second birth."



written 5th June for Constance's D quote contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 6/8/2024 7:58:00 AM
Cool
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Date: 6/14/2023 9:17:00 AM
Congrats and well done Jack. love phyl
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Date: 6/12/2023 6:11:00 AM
Jack, so deep, and thank you so much for sharing your emotional poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations on your win and thank you for using my quote as your inspiration !
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Date: 6/11/2023 4:30:00 PM
I see a congratulatory comment on here so I guess you placed in the contest so congratulations. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 6/11/2023 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Few words with much said. Have blessed day/week...........
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Date: 6/11/2023 1:40:00 AM
This is what keeps us going, Jack...the knowledge that there will be a rebirth after mortal death. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 6/10/2023 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful contrast, and praise be to God who gives us new life! (Thanks for your visit. I haven't been on here in a while and just noticed.)
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Date: 6/6/2023 11:20:00 AM
Nice memorial for her. Look at John Wesley Torchlighters for Charles Wesley. I saw it today.
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Date: 6/6/2023 6:38:00 AM
Another chance for rebirth, Very nicely penned
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Date: 6/5/2023 6:18:00 PM
Also a very nice and very short poem. Keep them coming, my friend
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Date: 6/5/2023 1:49:00 PM
Hi Jack faith is paramount in our lives, without it we are an empty shelL. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer. .
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Date: 6/5/2023 1:26:00 PM
If she died in the faith in Jesus, to be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord. Great thought penned for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/5/2023 7:39:00 AM
Wow yes there's beauty in fallen and withered in nature as your poem says in fab formatting and poetic wonder! Kudos!!
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