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While Close Dancing

On the dance-floor they did a zigzag But he was an ol’ scallywag: - “If you feel something hard - Pay no regard … It’s just my colostomy-bag”

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Cona Adams

Date: 12/15/2014 10:19:00 AM

LOL. Write On!

Robert Nehls

Date: 10/28/2014 4:33:00 PM

Hi Jack. Very funny my friend. I enjoyed it.... Robert.

Jack Clark
Date: 10/28/2014 10:32:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Robert. (I'd bet that something similar actually has occurred!) Thanks for your positive comment - greatly appreciated. Jack C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2014 5:18:00 AM

Unusual sense of humor..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/8/2014 10:49:00 AM

O Jack, hahahahholy shit hahah love

Jack Clark
Date: 10/8/2014 9:10:00 PM

Hey! Glad you liked this one, Rjat! Thanks for stoppin' by! Jack C

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 10:46:00 AM

Very funny! Hahaaha! You made me smile with this one Jack ;) have a lovely day my friend.xxxxxx D.

Jack Clark
Date: 10/8/2014 9:14:00 PM

That was my intent: To put a smile on a face. I'm glad your face was one of them! Thank you for you kind words, Dorian. Jack C

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 10:41:00 AM

ha ha ha love ittttttttttttttttt Hugs jan xxx

Jack Clark
Date: 10/8/2014 9:13:00 PM

Hi Jan! Long time - no see! I'm happy you liked it Jan ... and I enjoyed the hugs, too! Thank you. Jack C

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/8/2014 10:36:00 AM

....pay no regard...fine words.

Jack Clark
Date: 10/8/2014 9:15:00 PM

Thank you, Muhammad, for your words of encouragement. Jack C