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Which One Is Me

Six ballerinas on their toes waiting for curtain drop,
five of them are female and one male dressed as a ballerina,
I mingled among them in tutu,find which one is me!


© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (5th April 2011,photo based)

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Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 5/24/2011 4:21:00 AM A fun write...playing games with the mind of the reader! Well done! Regards, Robert. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/6/2011 7:14:00 AM hehe Kash this had me laughing out loud here, wishing you all the best with this witty Sijo :D Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/6/2011 1:18:00 AM haha you got me snickering here, Kashinath ;) very witty Sijo you have here --enjoyed the twist here ;)-- & I just read Andrea's comments below-- I definitely love her entry for Michael's contest, what a sweetie she is :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 10:42:00 PM kash, here I am half an hour past the deadline I set for myself tonight and saw your comment as I decided to go off. Thanks for your comment and I await another new poem from you! The old shoulder burning again. haha. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/5/2011 5:26:00 PM How clever Kashinath.. a different take on the photo and one that stands out luv.. good luck in the contest ..am sure Rick will enjoy immensely..luv.. perfection to me... Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/5/2011 5:20:00 PM LOL Now that's a great "spin" on the contest, Kash!! Love it! Wishing you success (and I'll try to figure out which of the ballerinas is you). Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 3:12:00 PM hahaha, Kash, this is so great how you are showing your sense of humor here. I love this one for being different and so cute. wEll, I did not get much done here because I took half my time to type and post my newest poem here. I hope Nikko likes it. She is so easy to write about! Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/5/2011 2:31:00 PM Ohhh, very humorous and nice approach to the theme of the picture, enjoyed your interpretation,kashinath Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/5/2011 2:14:00 PM yayyy, kashi.. you gassed me up! delicious..:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/5/2011 11:47:00 AM ;) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/5/2011 11:46:00 AM Cute ...Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara Login to Reply