Kash Poet Poet Sijo

Which One Is Me

Six ballerinas on their toes waiting for curtain drop,
five of them are female and one male dressed as a ballerina,
I mingled among them in tutu,find which one is me!


© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (5th April 2011,photo based)

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Zzzzz Zzzzz May 24, 2011 at 4:21 AM A fun write...playing games with the mind of the reader! Well done! Regards, Robert.

Wilma Neels April 6, 2011 at 7:14 AM hehe Kash this had me laughing out loud here, wishing you all the best with this witty Sijo :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 6, 2011 at 1:18 AM haha you got me snickering here, Kashinath ;) very witty Sijo you have here --enjoyed the twist here ;)-- & I just read Andrea's comments below-- I definitely love her entry for Michael's contest, what a sweetie she is :)

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2011 at 10:42 PM kash, here I am half an hour past the deadline I set for myself tonight and saw your comment as I decided to go off. Thanks for your comment and I await another new poem from you! The old shoulder burning again. haha. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 5, 2011 at 5:26 PM How clever Kashinath.. a different take on the photo and one that stands out luv.. good luck in the contest ..am sure Rick will enjoy immensely..luv.. perfection to me...

Carolyn Devonshire April 5, 2011 at 5:20 PM LOL Now that's a great "spin" on the contest, Kash!! Love it! Wishing you success (and I'll try to figure out which of the ballerinas is you). Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2011 at 3:12 PM hahaha, Kash, this is so great how you are showing your sense of humor here. I love this one for being different and so cute. wEll, I did not get much done here because I took half my time to type and post my newest poem here. I hope Nikko likes it. She is so easy to write about! Luv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta April 5, 2011 at 2:31 PM Ohhh, very humorous and nice approach to the theme of the picture, enjoyed your interpretation,kashinath

Nette Onclaud April 5, 2011 at 2:14 PM yayyy, kashi.. you gassed me up! delicious..:) huggs, nette

Kash Poet April 5, 2011 at 11:47 AM ;)

Sara Kendrick April 5, 2011 at 11:46 AM Cute ...Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara