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Wherever We Go, Whatever We Do

Carry me over the threshold of home into the future of life together. Oh, Let me no more in loneliness roam through wearisome roads and stormy weather. For the road remains weary, rain still falls. These burdens we've carried did not lighten; but side by side we can handle it all, and the thunderous storms do not frighten. Please do not think this is a one way street. That you must always be the one that's strong. Not all days, but in the middle we meet, fifty- fifty averaged our life long. Take me in your arms, through the door, please do, Then let's go back, and I will carry you!

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Date: 2/3/2025 11:41:00 PM
Dear crystol, this is such a beautiful sonnet that flows with such selfless and timeless love, i especially loved the lines “ Oh, Let me no more in loneliness roam through wearisome roads and stormy weather.” how touching! Pleasure reading this today. Congratulations on your win. Sending you light
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Date: 2/2/2025 12:13:00 PM
Oh, your last two lines are so powerful! Your entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations !
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Date: 2/1/2025 2:41:00 AM
Excellent, congratulations
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/2/2025 11:05:00 AM
Ty! Xo
Date: 1/31/2025 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Crystol! Your romantic "Wherever We Go, Whatever We Do" poem has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but among the 72 entries, your poem earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/2/2025 11:05:00 AM
Wow!! I'm so honored, thank you! I enjoyed this contest very much! Xo
Date: 1/4/2025 9:13:00 PM
Being lonely is bothersome and painful. If there is company, the tedium of weary miles we tread will be shortened. A beautiful sonnet, dear Crystol. Happy New Year.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/5/2025 7:54:00 AM
Ty Valsa, xo
Date: 1/4/2025 4:51:00 PM
H to C: in my weakness is your strength. Perfection perfected.You are a blessed lady. =o]]
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/5/2025 7:53:00 AM
I am! Thank God for blessings... you are one to me! Xo
Date: 1/4/2025 11:31:00 AM
This really well-crafted poem is about teamwork and mutual support in a loving relationship. It highlights the significance of sharing burdens and working together to overcome life's obstacles. The subject delves into subjects such as love, friendship, and the concept of equality in relationships. Good fit for Joseph May Contest. Best wishes and happy new year
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/5/2025 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for your summary review! I appreciate the read! Xo
Date: 1/3/2025 5:12:00 PM
Beautifully composed, Crystol. I love it. Happy New Year!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/3/2025 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward! A blessed and happy year to you too! Xo
Date: 1/2/2025 11:24:00 PM
A very uplifting verse Crystol, facing life's voyage together often encountering storms along the way. Wishing you both many more happy years together. Tom
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/3/2025 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Tom! Xo
Date: 1/2/2025 12:54:00 PM
Love the ending! You man is one lucky man. Thanks for sharing! And making my day.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/3/2025 4:00:00 PM
Awe shucks. …thank you Benjamin! Xo
Date: 1/2/2025 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have A Blessed New Year 2025.......
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/3/2025 4:01:00 PM
Ty Paula dear! Xoxo

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