Wherever We Go, Whatever We Do



Carry me over the threshold of home into the future of life together. Oh, Let me no more in loneliness roam through wearisome roads and stormy weather. For the road remains weary, rain still falls. These burdens we've carried did not lighten; but side by side we can handle it all, and the thunderous storms do not frighten. Please do not think this is a one way street. That you must always be the one that's strong. Not all days, but in the middle we meet, fifty- fifty averaged our life long. Take me in your arms, through the door, please do, Then let's go back, and I will carry you!
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Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:41 PM
Dear crystol, this is such a beautiful sonnet that flows with such selfless and timeless love, i especially loved the lines “ Oh, Let me no more in loneliness roam through wearisome roads and stormy weather.” how touching! Pleasure reading this today. Congratulations on your win. Sending you light
Peck Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Oh, your last two lines are so powerful! Your entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations !
Miller Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 2:41 AM
Excellent, congratulations
Woods Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Ty! Xo
Pinet Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations Crystol! Your romantic "Wherever We Go, Whatever We Do" poem has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but among the 72 entries, your poem earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend.
Woods Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Wow!! I'm so honored, thank you! I enjoyed this contest very much! Xo
George Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Being lonely is bothersome and painful. If there is company, the tedium of weary miles we tread will be shortened. A beautiful sonnet, dear Crystol. Happy New Year.
Woods Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Ty Valsa, xo
Parker Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 4:51 PM
H to C: in my weakness is your strength. Perfection perfected.You are a blessed lady. =o]]
Woods Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:53 AM
I am! Thank God for blessings... you are one to me! Xo
Poet Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 11:31 AM
This really well-crafted poem is about teamwork and mutual support in a loving relationship. It highlights the significance of sharing burdens and working together to overcome life's obstacles. The subject delves into subjects such as love, friendship, and the concept of equality in relationships. Good fit for Joseph May Contest. Best wishes and happy new year
Woods Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Thank you for your summary review! I appreciate the read! Xo
Ibeh Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 5:12 PM
Beautifully composed, Crystol. I love it. Happy New Year!
Woods Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 5:44 PM
Thank you so much Edward! A blessed and happy year to you too! Xo
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 11:24 PM
A very uplifting verse Crystol, facing life's voyage together often encountering storms along the way. Wishing you both many more happy years together. Tom
Woods Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Tom! Xo
Bartley Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Love the ending! You man is one lucky man. Thanks for sharing! And making my day.
Woods Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Awe shucks. …thank you Benjamin! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:44 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have A Blessed New Year 2025.......
Woods Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Ty Paula dear! Xoxo
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