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Whereisthepast

Don't forget my dear It's your turn to wind the clock before you sleep, love!

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/1/2011 1:45:00 PM

Clever little write. The present quickly becomes the past, in one tick of the clock. Thank goodness we have our memories!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2011 12:32:00 PM

This is sweet and also quite clever, Judy. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 4:09:00 PM

cool and clever write Judy.. luv that title flowing into one word .. do wind up clock still sell luv?

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/12/2011 7:10:00 AM

So nicely done. I dig this.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2011 6:23:00 AM

Those clocks that have to be wound are almost a thing of the past..Enjoyed reading your Senryu this morn..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/12/2011 6:18:00 AM

Or just hit the snooze and sleep in....smiles from this write Judy....