Wherefrom Enlightenment Dwells

To define innocence in the
countenance of a child's smile
and love's eminence in wildflowers,
conceive infinity in exalted ocean's roar
whilst summer breezes glance splendor
flourishing jasmine and hummingbirds
amidst evermore expansive sunrises,
whence space and time ceases to exist 
thereupon shall enlightenment dwell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Hi Paloma: Your words and the enlightenment dwells in you. My compliments!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Very meditative poem, Paloma. Such wonderful existential questions. A free thinker's delight. Exquisitely written poem with such lush language. Beautiful in every way. Much love to you, dear.
Nyaga Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:52 AM
Paloma... a beautiful peice on enlightenment delivered with the ease of a skillful pen.. // ;-) & Blessings
Godwin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:02 PM
I imagined all the beautious things you described and it got me high. In a good way. Such imagery truly lifts me and you delivered an ultra serving of imagery. Breathtaking, Paloma. So is your new pic - is it Audrey again? "All I want is a room somewhere, far away from the cold night air ..." You know that, right? Love the poem, CayCay
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Just beautiful Paloma.A fave
Green Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Not sure about all of this but I am sure that enlightenment is found in your poetry. Another amazing beautiful thought painting poem.
Turner Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:54 AM
This is pretty deep for a city girl, Paloma.
Inman Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:48 AM
A beautiful serene feel to your write Paloma. Please tell me where to find this place.
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Excellent and great imagery write with meaningful my friend. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Perhaps enlightenment exists in the spaces between our words which are immeasurable. I enjoyed your contemplative piece.
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 12:13 AM
How very deep of you! What is your IQ Paloma, I bet it's up around 250 for sure. Love this. Can you see the matrix? Haha.
Wigley Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Lovely, Paloma,gentle and fresh. Viv x
Sands Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 10:13 PM
I love this one Paloma - going in my favorites. A 7
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