Where Youth Did Tread

(An Addingham poem)

‘There!  Where every curve
injects another memory.’

Analytic beauty that
nestled in verdant valley
allows the mind to review,
where archaic dry-stone walls
enhance the ancestral ghosts,
impeccable trees, nature’s
guardian to one’s heady days,
inscribed when lovers called.
Now historic brows lost
within the village face,
expressive meadows
from a bygone age did
grace now lay in waste,
every thistle upon
throstle nest cut down
and stone barns redundant. 
For cement and brick
replace the gathering blooms,
fertile soil lay under macadam
and house numbers 
supersede the hawthorn hedge,
and old ‘Bram’ on horse and cart
daily down moor lane
long gone and dead.
Oh. Them old manifestations
embedded, the labour
of many a village son,
where leaf and wood
do part but once a year,
after seasons of regrowth
give way to winter’s ascetic sun
that rolls across Rombald’s moor.

‘Oh. Yes, the sun, one thing
that man has not yet changed.’

© Harry J Horsman   2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 2:12 AM
The traces of the past are completely replaced by the new. The older ones like us feel the difference and feel the loss. The only thing that hasn't changed so far is the sun ! A beautiful write. These thoughts course through my mind too, harry !
Robinson Jr. Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Exquisite imagery of expressive ink, Harry! Haunting poetry of days gone by, dear friend. Love and more love always.
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Very creative. Some places where I lived when I was growing up have changed so much but some have stayed the same one home burned to the ground and now has been replaced with a new modern home but the land looks the same. We searched when daddy was alive for a place where he had lived and it was completely gone all covered over with forest. So much can change in a lifetime. If the sun changed man might be in for a rude awakening. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Mcconnell Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Good pen Harry with such great imagery and insight. Take care, Gordon
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 11:43 PM
I can feel the moors and the bulldozer. xx
Fleming Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Damn, Harry -- this is darned good stuff!! And yes...if I sound a little jealous...it is because I am. Magnificent writing!! My very best regards - cheers! :) john
Buhagiar Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 1:40 AM
There are so many theories about the sun. Latest is that it shifted on its axis. Otherwise quite a reflective poem.
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