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Where Youth Did Tread

(An Addingham poem) ‘There! Where every curve injects another memory.’ Analytic beauty that nestled in verdant valley allows the mind to review, where archaic dry-stone walls enhance the ancestral ghosts, impeccable trees, nature’s guardian to one’s heady days, inscribed when lovers called. Now historic brows lost within the village face, expressive meadows from a bygone age did grace now lay in waste, every thistle upon throstle nest cut down and stone barns redundant. For cement and brick replace the gathering blooms, fertile soil lay under macadam and house numbers supersede the hawthorn hedge, and old ‘Bram’ on horse and cart daily down moor lane long gone and dead. Oh. Them old manifestations embedded, the labour of many a village son, where leaf and wood do part but once a year, after seasons of regrowth give way to winter’s ascetic sun that rolls across Rombald’s moor. ‘Oh. Yes, the sun, one thing that man has not yet changed.’ © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Date: 12/13/2021 2:12:00 AM
The traces of the past are completely replaced by the new. The older ones like us feel the difference and feel the loss. The only thing that hasn't changed so far is the sun ! A beautiful write. These thoughts course through my mind too, harry !
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Date: 5/13/2021 9:03:00 AM
Exquisite imagery of expressive ink, Harry! Haunting poetry of days gone by, dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Very creative. Some places where I lived when I was growing up have changed so much but some have stayed the same one home burned to the ground and now has been replaced with a new modern home but the land looks the same. We searched when daddy was alive for a place where he had lived and it was completely gone all covered over with forest. So much can change in a lifetime. If the sun changed man might be in for a rude awakening. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 5/3/2021 1:43:00 PM
Good pen Harry with such great imagery and insight. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 5/2/2021 11:43:00 PM
I can feel the moors and the bulldozer. xx
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Date: 5/2/2021 7:02:00 PM
Damn, Harry -- this is darned good stuff!! And yes...if I sound a little jealous...it is because I am. Magnificent writing!! My very best regards - cheers! :) john
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Date: 5/2/2021 1:40:00 AM
There are so many theories about the sun. Latest is that it shifted on its axis. Otherwise quite a reflective poem.
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