Where Wild Creatures Paused

Stone floors whisper of
waterfalls poured through
algae, moss, fern
sedimentary, limestone
layer upon layer formed
from steaming warm springs.
 
This same granite counter
once graced by
a gazelle - or on its bedrock 
a jackal howled, a shy marten 
scurried away.  This same stone
cut square, smoothed, glazed
and laid in some ultra-modern kitchen
for imbedded fossils to shine      
from fifty million years of nature-
a jaguar spirit crouching
ready to leap up,
brushing the
potted ferns

FIRST PLACE in the "Early March 18 Standard" Poetry Contest, 
Brian Strand, Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 7:01 AM
A wonderful tribute ~ so amazing when we stop to think about the history of what we take for granted and try to imagine ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:49 PM
wow, this is amazing. A very well deserved win from Brian. CONGRATS.
One Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Vivid imagery in your poem Suzanne, your words really created a picture..
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Awesome imagery from what's laying ever so still now in your kitchen. Bravo, Suzanne. Congrats on your fine win.
Delaney Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Some of my favorite shows are on how the earth was formed and archeology. Glad you enjoyed my musings. Cheers, SuZ
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Congrats Suzanne, lovely imagery :)
Delaney Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thanks so much, Gary: Appreciate you reading and commenting. SuZ
Williams Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:19 AM
A brilliant description of geological history trapped in the granite counter. I could imagine the images of your portrayal in every line of your poem SuZ. Thanks for sharing ...Maria
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Wonderful to see you Maria: you have added joy to my day. Hugs, SuZ
Michael Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Incredible is your vision...to see a jaguar's spirit in a stone...Creative poetry...All the best
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Hello Arturo: In modern life we sometimes forget our connection to Nature. It is always around us but we forget to see. Thanks for your welcome visit. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:35 PM
The stone from the wild has embedded memories..as you depict so well in your lines...for imbedded fossils to shine from fifty million years of nature..a unique theme SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Hi Vijay: Glad you enjoyed. I went to a Granite warehouse to pick out a granite for my kitchen island and counters. So many varieties .....amazing really. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 11:29 AM
So interesting, Suzanne!
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Hi Kin: Thanks for reading and commenting. SuZ
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