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Where Whispers Beg

I already miss the summer grapes so sweet and succulent to taste chill infringes the Autumn night bringing forth added layers to the satin already slid on top slip in close where whispers beg lay upon my warmth holding dreams hostage wrapped meticulously in every crease and edge hypnotized a desire's bred nothing more needed said still one with the night comfort held ever tight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/26/2017 12:42:00 PM
Fav for me Tim
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:34:00 PM
oh my its great Tim........Seren
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:06:00 PM
I really loved this one Tim!
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Date: 9/25/2017 4:51:00 PM
ooh I love that line slip in close where whispers beg. deliciously sensual poem Tim!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:49:00 PM
Those satin sheets with or without the blankets, along with a warm body sure beats those made of flannel. Your title is scrumptious, Tim, and it's placed in perfect position in the poem.
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:26:00 PM
I felt a flux of temperatures reading this Tim, fantastic pen :) xomo
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
- The summer's tasty fruits will come back, Tim ... now we have to enjoy the fall - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:15:00 PM
Title grabbed me, well done Tim...
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Date: 9/25/2017 12:55:00 PM
This is so nice Tim. Pleasant to read and I love how you ended it too! :)
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