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Where Whispers Beg

I already miss the summer grapes
so sweet and succulent to taste

chill infringes the Autumn night
bringing forth added layers
to the satin already slid on top

slip in close
where whispers beg

lay upon my warmth
holding dreams hostage
wrapped meticulously
in every crease and edge

hypnotized a desire's bred
nothing more needed said
still  one with the night
comfort  held ever tight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/26/2017 12:42:00 PM
Fav for me Tim
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:34:00 PM
oh my its great Tim........Seren
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:06:00 PM
I really loved this one Tim!
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Date: 9/25/2017 4:51:00 PM
ooh I love that line slip in close where whispers beg. deliciously sensual poem Tim!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:49:00 PM
Those satin sheets with or without the blankets, along with a warm body sure beats those made of flannel. Your title is scrumptious, Tim, and it's placed in perfect position in the poem.
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:26:00 PM
I felt a flux of temperatures reading this Tim, fantastic pen :) xomo
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
- The summer's tasty fruits will come back, Tim ... now we have to enjoy the fall - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:15:00 PM
Title grabbed me, well done Tim...
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Date: 9/25/2017 12:55:00 PM
This is so nice Tim. Pleasant to read and I love how you ended it too! :)
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