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Where Whippoorwills Weep

A scarlet sun singes the edge of Earth, its receding rays giving shadows girth. And darkness swiftly spreads over the ground, swallowing the last lingering light found. A dying sun sends shadows forth to creep through the undergrowth, where whippoorwills weep. And dusk gathers them tightly together, loosely leashed to a nocturnal tether. Ebony pools begin to ebb and flow as the day shuts down, and time starts to slow. And twilight welcomes the starry skies back, glittering against a backdrop of black. Silhouettes shackle shadows to the night, awaiting Dawn and Her first rays of light. And yet, as the moon rises, they disperse to explore new horizons to traverse. (Rhyme) 11/10/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:10:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 3:58:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Emile, and a deserved win - Congratulations. Your write is lovely ... CayCay
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfull win wih this worthy poem Emile! I loved your outstanding imagery.
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 12:17:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your Shadows at Night win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 12:14:00 AM
Excellent Emile Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/15/2015 10:46:00 PM
Wonderful write, Emile, congratulations on your win ! :)
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/15/2015 9:11:00 PM
Big congrats on your fine win my friend. Great poem!!
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/15/2015 6:04:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/15/2015 2:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/15/2015 1:42:00 PM
an enchanting poem Emile that delights congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Shadow, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Emile.
Date: 11/11/2015 6:42:00 PM
G'day Emile... a true poetic take upon nightfall Emile - enjoyed - Lindsay
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Date: 11/12/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/11/2015 1:04:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful this is my friend Emile....excellent...........A.M.
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you, my friend, Afolabi. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 5:50:00 PM
wow, what great imagery and use of descriptive words, my friend. I expect to see this get a high rating!!
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 2:25:00 PM
I love the imagery this depicts and you conveyed it very eloquent and excellent. Brilliant one............A.M.
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 2:19:00 PM
Your poems are always so beautiful, Emile!!
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Eve, what a nice thing to say, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 1:50:00 PM
You held my rapt attention throughout, Emile. Excellently written and more than worthy of a 7. It's a gift from you to add this to my fav list.
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin, I appreciate your wonderful comments. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 12:38:00 PM
wonderful imagery and alliteration Emile good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 12:10:00 PM
You never cease to wow me. A 7
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:53:00 PM
Why thank you very much Anna, what a nice thing to say. Emile.
Date: 11/10/2015 11:58:00 AM
I enjoyed this. nice flowing imagery
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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