Where Trouble Hides

While dodging dangers where trouble hides, you've learned to beware of trickster games. And survived the emotional tides in a sea of strangers with no names. You can't imagine how love must feel; for it's a feeling you've never known. Yet, the ache in your heart is real; even though it's masked and seldom shown. Hope has you chasing dream after dream; yet luck never tends to flow your way. And at times, you feel the need to scream, for happiness keeps slipping away. Lost in a crowd you’re always alone feeling like you will never belong. For in this city of tears and stone everything you do seems to be wrong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/9/2018 9:17:00 AM
Beautiful expression of feeing down. Love this stanza: "Lost in a crowd you’re always alone feeling like you will never belong. For in this city of tears and stone everything you do seems to be wrong"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your support and friendly visits are most encouraging and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/31/2015 5:04:00 AM
such realism in this piece brilliantly executed...' city of tears and stone' does it for me... fascinating,emile.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, your visits always cheer me up. Emile.
Date: 3/30/2015 7:09:00 PM
A fine emotive write, perfectly describes the feelings of those alone and lonesome. A 7. Have a better nad less lonesome week, Emile. Hugs! Kim :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Kim, you visits are most welcome. Emile.
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