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Where the Sun Don'T Shine

There're icicles and clumps of snow In places where the sun don't shine. It's nowhere that you'd want to go - Places where the sun don't shine. Things melt slowly, if at all, In places where the sun don't shine. Spring may stutter, even stall In places where the sun don't shine. If you think I've missed the ticket With these rhyming thoughts of mine, You know just where you can stick it - Yes, sir - where the sun don't shine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/26/2018 6:44:00 PM
Hi Ilene, I just love this one, in fact you haven't written anything that I don't like, this put a smile on my face, thank you, if you don't like my comment then you Can Stick it where the sun don't shine, take care my friend and Happy New Year.....Vera
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Date: 12/24/2018 12:03:00 AM
Oh my you have me laughing so much here!!! Merry Christmas!!!
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Date: 12/23/2018 6:43:00 PM
Funny one Ilene. Straight to the point as well......80)
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Date: 12/23/2018 3:18:00 PM
noooo...you didn't miss a thing : )
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